Reviews for Bumblebee's Boy |
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Sides rock jazz crue chapter 1 . 4/19 Please continue |
Guest chapter 38 . 7/7/2018 Amazing. This story is so good! Please continue to update, as well as your other stories. I really wish you'd continue What Makes a Family. |
Greg 14 chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 Awesome story man! Please update this and others. I also really liked the one with Wheeljack as well. Maybe you could do one about TFP Arcee taking in a kid too. |
xXFrostKittenXx chapter 15 . 3/27/2018 I like this story a lot. I like the slow build of Bee and Trevor’s relationship. But most of my family works in healthcare in some fashion, so I have to say something. Sarah says Trevor has to take his antibiotics at three. No doctor is going to prescribe antibiotics for the flu. The flu is a virus; the doctor might prescribe antivirals but those only work at the first sign of symptoms. More likely the doctor is going to prescribe a cold and flu medicine. Most of those are over the counter. |
Guest chapter 21 . 10/28/2017 rellay love this stroy i wish good be book ist rellay god story and detalis are rellay did great jobb on trehre persnoliy |
MadnessJones chapter 49 . 7/24/2017 That was a fairly realistic chapter between Michael and Trevor. It's sad, but hopeful. I'll look forward to seeing where this story goes when you eventually get back to it. It's one of your better works IMO. Also, I never thought I would say this, but I'm looking forward to seeing more Leo Splitz :P |
MadnessJones chapter 48 . 7/24/2017 Wow, did not expect the Michael subplot to go in that direction! Now I've gotta read the next chapter O.O |
MadnessJones chapter 47 . 7/24/2017 I like the way you introduced Leo. Also, the president's daughter was cool :) |
MadnessJones chapter 46 . 7/24/2017 It's kind of funny that the president is a glorified real estate agent in this chapter XD |
MadnessJones chapter 45 . 7/24/2017 D'aww! This was a nice chapter, and I love the conflicting emotions Trevor has about loving his father yet getting sick of his overprotectiveness. That's something I think most teenager (and former teenagers) can relate to :) |
MadnessJones chapter 44 . 7/24/2017 Trevor's biological father is acting strangely indeed. Did he sober up and realize what he lost, or is he just trying to cause trouble? Either way, Jolt can't get to the Witwicky house fast enough. |
MadnessJones chapter 43 . 7/23/2017 They all survived, which is definitely a good thing, but Trevor will probably have nightmares about this for a long time to come. It's sad that Bumblebee had to kill Barricade, but in this case, he had no choice. In an odd way, it also means Barricade isn't suffering anymore either, because the death of his mate was driving him to the brink. A sad situation that concluded in the best way possible T.T |
MadnessJones chapter 42 . 7/23/2017 Yay! They got Trevor! And also, Barricade has seriously lost it. Did he really think Jazz would agree to give a false report? What a dope! Also, I know he was a bad guy, but I feel sorry for Sunspot. He was used and then killed u_u |
MadnessJones chapter 41 . 7/23/2017 So, to recap, Optimus has a plan, Bumblebee has a temper, and Galloway finally got a clue. Yeah, this is getting intense! |
MadnessJones chapter 40 . 7/23/2017 Fraggit Barricade! Poor Trevor... |