I'm usually too lazy to login, but this story was worth it. It felt so realistic and what they would say to each other. Thanks for making such am incredible story.

Awr, so cute :") I had no difficulty at all picturing this, all the characters emotions translated perfectly in my mind. I could even hear the intonation in Joel and Ellie's voices, hear how they were speaking...considering this is just a oneshot, that is a pretty good achievement :). You managed to capture them clearly in such a small space and made it so goddamn adorable c:
Good job, keep it up!

It was *wipes eyes* beautiful

Love it, the story, the wording...I wish my English is as good as yours

Love this! Really well written.

This is so cute
:) you should totally write more stories like this ! x