Holy shit this is amazing my dude

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Ho-ly hell. This was amazing! Your scenes we're so descriptive I felt I was there. The action, romance, emotions and dialogue we're all spot on. Spidy sounded like the web-head should. All characters showed astounding progression. I was so enthralled as I read, watching them evolve as people and getting swept away by the emotions. Loved it from beginning to end!

P.S. haven't read the others yet, but I think I can sense Eddie's descent to Venom. I will just have to read to find out. Can't wait!

Forget this being one of the best written Spiderman stories this is one of best, if not the best Story thst I have ever read. All the characters seem original and stick closely to how they are described without becoming OC for even a fraction of a second. 26 chapters seemed short but now that im done the face felt perfect and the chapters all had a purpose to the plot. Evennthe ones that focused on Felecia or Harry. This deserves way more recognition and deserves to be at the top of the fanfiction site with reviews, follows, etc. Im just happy I have a sequal to read after this and even more stories afterwards.

So when i see these chapters I immediately sigh and complain about having to read a chapter that's unimportant and uninteresting. But I see know thats not true. Every time you write onebof these they're important to the story just as much as the others. I also like how you wrote harry with conflicting ideas. Wanting to kill Spider-Man but not Peter Parker. Having to suffer through the goblin's influence. Its all really good writing. I wonder if you took classes or if your just self-taught.

Why does Mary Jane call him "Tiger" ? IMA have to look that up

I had to force myself to stop reading just to type this. This should defiantly be up there at the top of best spiderman fanfics. More people need to read this, seriously.

HECKING
JUST
CANNOT
HELP
MY FEELINGS AND MY SOUL AND EVERY PARTICLE OF MY BEING IS JUST CALLING OUT THINGS I DO NOT EVEN KNOW

Not only is this written wonderfully, BUT MY HEART HURTS FOR HARDY. Felicia is awesome and it makes me sad to see her this I also love the way you wrote her and her situation is interesting.

So does that mean Mary Jane knows? that would be a refreshing change from what we have seen before if she does.

Good job.

Wow, I know I am late to this game but I have to say this may be the best piece of Spider-Man fan fiction I have ever read. You just nail Peter and MJ so well and this chapter has the perfect balance of personal moments and action that I would expect from an issue of the comics and I have been reading the comics since I was six. Well done so far, thanks for writing this.

Um okay. Well I started reading this and really couldn't stop, so bravo! You caught my attention. And now I'm wishing I could write more like you XD
I loved this story. Very much. It flowed like a movie, and I could see all the scenes very easily. I'm glad there's a sequel to go start on! Thanks for writing!

A very interesting sequel that generally makes up for the fact that an ‘official’ one will never be made; good job.
While I’m slightly let down at your decision to just tease us with details about Spider-Man’s encounter with the Vulture rather than actually show it, your other characters generally work well. In the spirit of the best adaptations, your interpretations of the Black Cat and Doctor Octopus keep some of the essential aspects of their personalities intact, such as Felicia’s dedication to those she loves and Octavius’s arrogance, and put a new engaging spin on things, with Felicia’s dedication almost excessive until it takes a knock and Octavius genuinely wanting to HELP others until Oscorp gets hold of his work.
The first meeting with Mary Jane is perfectly handled, each recognising the right traits in the other to appeal to them as romantic partners without needing to give away their biggest secrets too quickly, and Harry’s mental state at this point is explored in a very intriguing manner, exploring his warped perspective of Peter and Spider-Man as somehow ‘separate’ even as he acknowledges that they’re the same person.
The events leading up to Octavius’s transformation are well-handled, giving us an interesting new reason for him to completely flip beyond him developing a ‘telepathic’ connection to his artificial limbs, and while I question his rapid degree of control when the arms weren’t designed to be operated in that manner, the results generally seem to work, both in terms of the dramatic fight and the subsequent emotional upheaval as Peter learns how many people know his secret (Although I questioned how things unfolded with him and MJ after a relatively short time together just because she knew his secret, particularly when you seemed to contradict yourself on whether or not they’d gone THAT far; since nothing shown in the film suggests that he and Gwen made it to that stage, it could raise questions about Peter’s emotional commitment to one or the other).
The subsequent Ravencroft outbreak felt like a bit of an abrupt shift for Octavius- wanting revenge on Spider-Man is one thing, but breaking out criminals after all his plans to keep the city safe feels like he’s mentally fallen too far too fast- but the twist with Harry was an interesting touch nevertheless, and the final chapter’s crossovers could sow some interesting seeds for the future (Although I hope you’re going with an original new storyline for the FF; that last movie was NOT good, and I normally enjoy superhero films).
In general, you had some very interesting ideas here, but you could have explored certain areas in greater depth than you did; lack of the Vulture aside, your exploration of Peter and MJ’s relationship seemed a bit erratic at times, and there just seemed to be some areas where you were more concerned with the final result than exploring how the characters developed up to that point.

And thus a BIG set-up is born.

Stark Building over OsCorp, Stark Tower maybe?

Harry Osborn gives a push to the Fantastic Four.

Also, if you are going for MCU-ish tie-ins; I guess this happens before the first Avengers.

If you are expanding down the road I will be sure to tune in.

"One More Day" LOL.