Reviews for Rise of a Legend
Pro writer that we all like chapter 29 . 7/22
Admittedly, I haven't read the chapter yet, but congrats on the baby and I hope everything goes well.
pearladvance chapter 29 . 7/15
can you add dawn and may in harem list
Badoobadoop chapter 1 . 7/6
I would love to see more of this story please continue!
Pink ranger 13 chapter 29 . 6/26
It’s a great story and please continue the story
Guest chapter 29 . 6/15
Replace Hilda with Miette if you do. Ash will need a girl who can cook. ;)
Guest chapter 29 . 6/15
Hey, if you add some Galar people/Pokémon to this, add Marnie to the harem. Also, I’m a bit confused. Is Mietre in the harem? Because she’s acting like the other girls that like him.
Guest chapter 28 . 5/18
Why do I have a feeling that Mienshao will join Ash after it battles the likes of Ash's Lucario?
Guest chapter 29 . 5/11
Do I see a foreshadowing of Ash's Garchomp x Cynthia's Garchomp?
chrysalis918 chapter 7 . 5/8
at the current rate of the harem, he'll probably have like 100 wives, like bruh. can you even handle that many woman or are you just gonna discard them as you go along.
chrysalis918 chapter 3 . 5/8
I honestly expected some combos, fusions between moves...
Alonso chapter 1 . 4/18
If your going to replace Dawn please make the replacement something rare.
kishinaract chapter 29 . 4/17
Dude! love your work and glad to see your back in action again! take your time man you make good work and its worth the wait!
willshad chapter 29 . 4/14
I love the story so far! I was just wondering about the relationship that Mia and Ash have. Is it completely platonic, or could it pick up at some point down the road?
Guest chapter 29 . 4/13
Great Chapter, and happy you've updated. I know the Corona situation is halting everyone these days so its understandable. Btw can you add Aria (The Kalos Queen), and Lisia (The Hoenn Queen) to the harem? Both especially Lisia are rare. And when will Marcey show up again? Can she be added to the harem? Also Looking forward to this Zyon & Mewtwo vs Shadow, Espeon, & Mismagius fight. And Shadow gets his ass kicked. And Ash joins in the fray. It's fitting as Mewtwo is Ash's Pokemon. Looking forward to the next chapter. :3
yu yu chapter 29 . 4/13
Good chapter, so Shadow is now attacking Mewtwo, i hope that Zyon can saves him, to prevents that Mewtwo ends like Ho oh, like a slave of Shadow.

Also, after the battle between Zyon and Mewtwo against Shadow, i wonder if you would gives another spotlight to the former friends of ash again. Specifically, see that they are searching for Delia, and when they finds her, they learns that Delia is staying with Ash, leaving the former friends of Ash surprised for this finding, and perhaps even some of them naively thinks that Ash finally forgaves them. But Delia could clears them that Ash simply allows her be with him by some specific reasons that she wouldn't gives, and Ash asked her don't brings the former friends to his house, leaving them sad, but in the same time curious, making that maybe some of them makes the stupidness of follows Delia to learn the whereabout of Ash, setting in motion future possible conflicts and incidents.

Good story. And i wishes you good luck with your baby, and i wishes you good health to you and your family, keep the good job :)
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