This was pretty good ... I would recommend expanding on the scenes a bit more because I felt as though the scenes were flying by to quickly but otherwise I loved it ... just wondering Welshmen your planning to update

please please update soon

I really liked this chapter because all the stuff with Kaycee and Loki. Loki is one of my all time favorite villains. This also had one of my favorite scenes when Loki tries to control Stark. I didn't care that it was short...it didn't feel like that to me.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.

Tony needs to realize loki has his daughter and go in to kick ass dad mode

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more and we get to the fighting. Please update soon.

I know I've said it before, but I LOVE LOKI! Lol I felt it deserved all caps. I like that you have something involving him and Kaycee...and that she is able to tell that he is doing something to her. It is interesting and if I wasn't already following the story, those scenes would have made me follow it (:

I don't care if you take a long time before posting, I do the same thing with my own stories. As long as you continue to update and make good chapters, I don't care how long the wait is for new chapters.

I love this fanfic :) :) :)
Plz update again soon :) :) :)
- Lily

Awesome job! I loved Kaycee's reaction to Loki asking her to be his Queen. I enjoyed it. I can't wait until you update!

I loved it. I can't wait to read how Peter will react to knowing that she is in the center of it. Please update soon.

Thanks love! I soo needed this! It was good!

Make kaycee grab some thing to fight with

Loki made me want me to watch the first Thor and Captain America movies and essentially got me hooked on the marvel movies (with a little thanks from Iron Man/Tony...lol). I think you portrayed him in character. We don't really get to see hat side of movie villains that much but I think you did a good job. I like he fact Loki I'd paired with someone in a way because he needs to look forwards to something other than taking over the world...besides, what good is ruling the world if you have no one to share it with? I hope you have more stuff with Loki since I love him...lol

No way should she be with Steve according to comics Steve has widow if you ever watched the next avengers movie they have a son

THIS IS AWESOME! Please keep going! I'm excited to know what happens next! Please update soon!