Reviews for Restitution
Obvious Ghost chapter 9 . 1/24/2015
Wow. Just... wow. I'm really amazed by this.

The end of book 3 was as impressive for me as it probably was for everyone else, but I hadn't really considered going more in-depth with other characters' reactions. And geez, it must have been crazy tough to imagine their voices, actions, thoughts, worries and hopes, all while still keeping the focus of each chapter on Korra herself. Kudos.

They were all good, but this last chapter in particular felt the most vivid, I think. I don't know why- I could just picture the whole scene, and the idea of them just relaxing and kind of sneaking off on their own was wonderful. I can't imagine a better ending to this series.
Anon chapter 9 . 9/28/2014
This is beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this :)
Sour Queen chapter 9 . 9/24/2014
Mmm...I'm so sad this is already over, but thank you for the much needed makorra fix. I needed a hit, lol. It was a beautiful chapter. Feel free to post more makorra stories ok? You have a permanent fan here!
Golden Drachma chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
amazing story! wonderful writing :)
erasedaccount1 chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
I think you've heard this from a bunch of people, and this is probably meaningless, but I'll say it again. Beautiful story. It's perfect on so many levels. The details, the characterizations, the relationships you portray between everyone, the balance between the narratives and the dialogues - all spot on. My standouts were the Tonraq's, Bolin's, Mako's (Katara's appearance here was nicely done) and this one, the Korra II/epilogue of the sort. Everything ties together very nicely. I loved that you left her still vulnerable but undoubtedly much stronger to live. I loved their kiss here, I have to mention that. Without hesitation, this is hands down the best Book 3 aftermath healing story. So, just thank you so much for having written this. It's a beloved piece in my heart.
Hannah chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
This ending was incredible! Best ending to a story I've ever read! I can imagine this whole thing in my head because I go out on my local lake in the early hours of the morning and do this exact thing!3 its amazing and its some of my favorite summer memories. I can completely relate to the serenity of going under water when its pitch black. Its amazing! Have you done all this yourself, or did you just come up with it? Because its amazing!:)
Luna chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
Thank you, for this... Lovley story, really!
PantherlilyCat chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
Wow, didn't expect you to finish Restitution so quickly. I feel kinda sad, but I'm also proud of you. You did a really great job with these and even though you found it hard to imagine the POV of some characters, I have to say that you did all of them very well. This chapter is definitely my favorite, it was sweet, funny and emotional. And hey Makoraaaa! I didn't expect them to kiss, but I'm glad you put that scene in there because I realized how much I missed it. Well anyway I look forward to reading your next project so until then!
Guest chapter 8 . 9/20/2014
Holy shit holy shit... This i G! Thank you so much for filling my korra needs:)
Guest chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
That was beautiful.
Miah-Chan chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
Everything about this entire story is perfection. I loved every moment! I look forward to reading more amazing work from you. :)
Guest chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
This was perfect. Love. Love. Love!
la-vaniteuse chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
This was my favourite chapter! I think that you are good at figuring out what each character needs and finding some way to organically implement that into a good story. Everything is very understated and natural. I liked the 4-way interactions in this chapter a lot, and it had a good mood to end the series on.
LoveLikeElena chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
Hi! This was really good! I like how Korra's friends surprise her. I can't wait for more!
JackieStarSister chapter 9 . 9/20/2014
I feel like I'm running out of adjectives to use. I think I've already said "wonderful," "beautiful," and "perfect." So how about "lovely" now? I liked the continuity of Asami mentioning her dad's phone call. The kiss didn't feel at all contrived because you've hinted romantic feelings between those two throughout the story, and especially in the previous chapter. Those last lines are inspiring. This chapter and the entire project have warmed my heart very much. Thank you for writing this.
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