*wince*

Why does this fanfic have so many haters? It is actually a good, wholesome story. :(

The comment below this one is from Amelie. Sorry I forgot to write my name on it.

Wow, what a plot twist! I did not see this coming at all! Anyways, I really applaud your creativity for writing a Christianized version of Harry Potter, and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this fanfic from the beginning to end. I am a little disappointed that you won't be continue with this fanfic anymore, but things happen in life that are beyond our control, and times change, and I respect that. Hopefully, you can find another way to continue on your mission to spread the Lord's word, and I wish you the best of luck for the future. :)

What the fuck

I really like Harry Potter because he is always kind to everybody, even if they are not kind to him back, and does the right thing no matter what, even in the face of fear and danger. He has a good head on his shoulders and a good heart, is calm under pressure, and embodies the qualities of innocence, purity, and is a force of good and righteousness in this fictional world; the qualities of a good person and a good Christian. He seems so happy and cheerful all the time, and I can really learn a lot from Harry on what I need to improve on and how to be a better person. I can tell that your writing really improved with Greg's help, keep up the great work! )

I can see that the writing class you are taking is helping you; your writing is now shorter and more concise and to the point. I agree with you, women and men are equal, but they do have some innate differences. In this chapter, you also brought up a very important point: it is important for people to question the authorities and do what they feel is right instead of just blindly doing as they tell them to and following the crowd without really thinking about what is right. Doing the latter would give the people in charge opportunities to misuse their power and lead their followers astray from what is actually the right thing to do. You gave some very good advice in this chapter that I will use in my life. Anyways, I hope that you will keep improving your writing skills; you definitely have the potential to be a very good writer if you practice a lot. I really enjoy reading this story, and I can't wait to read more! )

I'm so sorry that your other little one has also gotten this sickness! I hope they will recover soon and everything will be back to normal. Hopefully it is nothing serious, and I wish you all the best!

I am happy that you have decided to take a beginner's writing course to improve your writing skills! Hopefully that would really help you with this fanfic and make your writing even better and more interesting than it already is! Anyways, Hogwarts School of Prayer and Miracles is more boring than I first thought it would be because the students still have to learn about the school subjects and other academic stuff. Also, I like all the descriptions you have included in your writing because it really helps bring everything to life and lets me experience what Harry and the other characters are experiencing. Also, the friendship between Harry and Ronald is a good example of how we should treat other people, and helps remind all of us that we can still be great friends with people who have very different beliefs from us and that we should be kind and be respectful to everyone. The world would be a much better place if more people are like Harry and Ronald. Anyways, best of luck on your writing course and keep up the great work! )

Wow, what a plot twist! I did not see this one coming and that Ronald Weasley and the other hats are working with Voldermort. Anyways, you have done a really good job coming up with this unique and interesting storyline, while still sort of following the structure of Harry Potter. I like how you kept the story both entertaining and informative about the differences and conflicts between the different branches of Christianity. Great job writing this, and I can't wait to find out more! )

I am sorry that you are getting so much hate from people calling you a hater and a misogynist, and I don't think you are either. I have really enjoyed reading your fanfic so far, and I think you are a good person for taking the time and trouble to do this. You definitely should continue writing and not listen to what the haters say.

I relate to what you are saying here. There has been so much conflict in the past between different branches of Christianity over the "correct" way to worship the Lord, even though they are all equally valid, just different. Even today, this conflict has not gone away, and age-old tensions and scars still linger. I understand this, and I wish that people would just be more understanding and accepting of people who do things differently than them, and if everybody did that, the world would be a much better place. I am impressed on how you are able to cleverly bring up the differences between the different denominations of Christianity while still sticking to the Harry Potter storyline and the Sorting Hat.

Wow, I really like all the clear descriptions that you have written! It really helps me picture what is happening in the story. I like the spin you put on the story about Voldemort's motives; I think it is really fitting for a story about Harry Potter and Christianity. You have shown true committment by continuing to write this story despite all the bad things life has thrown at you, and I applaud your determination. I really hope that this story will make a difference in other peoples' lives, just like you said. I'm so sorry that your child got pneumonia, hopefully he/she is much better now.

I really like your creativity and how you rewrote Harry Potter as a story about Christianity and the forces of good and evil in this world. We could all learn a lesson or two from this piece of literature! Anyways, this writing is good, but I just have one problem with it: the people in your story seem to rely on the Lord for everything, be it going to a place or setting the table and making the food. This portrays Him as our servant, and shows that characters have an unhealthy dependence on the Lord for doing even basic everyday things like making food and walking to a certain place, and it shows that they are sort of lazy people. I know that God has provided us with basically everything in this world, but that doesn't mean that we don't have any responsibilities in life or not have to do any work. I know that this is more symbolic than anything in the sense that we are all dependent on the Lord for everything, but I think you have taken it a little bit too far, and it conveys the wrong message. Other than that, I think you have done a really good job writing this and keep up the good work! )

I like how you incorporated Bible verses into your fanfic and it just shows how the lessons we learned from the Bible apply to our everyday life. Anyways, Hogwarts School of Prayer and Miracles seems like a very cool place and I would like to go there (better then high school, lol.) Wouldn't it be so cool if prayers could really transport us to places instantly? That would save a lot of time of sitting in traffic and stuff! This story is very well-written, and I would really like to see what happens next. )