Reviews for Mother Knows Best
pokemaster101 chapter 6 . 12/9/2018
I never saw a story like this before. Great!

Mother/son and father/daughter is nice. Hope Jazz is on Danny’s side.

Fenton and Phantom are separate. Hm

Keep it up!
Shadowmaster91 chapter 5 . 1/26/2018
You could make it a crossover. Gravity Falls or Young Justice or American Dragon (or all together). i don't know... I only want for you to continue this.
Shadowmaster91 chapter 6 . 1/26/2018
You will never finish this? T_T
Guest chapter 6 . 4/25/2017
This is amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story si far, so much hurt, feelings and emotions. Gosh I feel so sad for Danny, how cantos patents not realise that maybe just maybe his son's dna merged with that of a ghost's dna, why is that si hard to think of? I hope his parents realise that soon, or at least his mum. His mum does have hope in him, subciously cares about even when she THINKS this isn't her son. Gosh they drive me crazy. I love Jazz's intervention and I know she'll stick by her brother. I'm really loving the plot and your writing skills is amazing. I really hope that you update soon and please don't give up on this awesome story. I really want to know where you take this and I hope Danny's pain of rejection and betrayal is eased. Please continue!
bibliophilea chapter 6 . 1/4/2017
This story is amazing. I love how you manage all the subtle changes in Danny's personality, and I love how you wrote Phantom and the ways in which he's different from Danny. Phantom seems like Danny, but more sociopathic - he's out of touch with his human emotions, though he understands intellectually how he feels when he's human. All he's left with are his more ghostly emotions, which function very differently from his human emotions, but don't make him evil - just a bit colder and crueler than his human self. And I love seeing all of this from Maddie's perspective - I rarely find stories that examine the differences in personality Fenton, Phantom, and Fenton pre-accident in such detail, but entirely from an outside perspective. And while I love that the next chapter (if you choose to complete this) will be from Danny's point of view because I want to see what's going through his head, I absolutely love seeing Maddie's perspective on the changes to her baby boy.

Thank you for writing this, and for putting it in a place where I could find it! I sincerely hope you come back and add to this story, but I understand if you don't.
theboookofkells chapter 6 . 12/25/2016
HI! Just found this fic saved in an old folder of mine, so I gave it a re-read. And WOW, this was good. Your writing is so clear and makes me feel like I'm right there with the characters. I feel honestly terrified for Maddie's life! Thank you so much!
Maya Chain 23 chapter 6 . 9/21/2016
This is a really nice fic which explores very well the Fenton parents' very biased view on ghosts and poor Jaz who is completely left out of the loop.
xxShatteredPeacez chapter 6 . 5/5/2016
I haven't read a story particularly like this one, and I have to say it's really well written and the character build up is spot on. I know it's been over a year since the last update, but I really hope you don't abandon this fic. I love it!
the-darker-side-of-things chapter 6 . 4/17/2016
Ahhhhhh this is sooo good, I'm hooked
Guest chapter 6 . 11/15/2015
So I read on your profile page that you're lacking inspiration for this story, which is something I can understand. However if you're ever wanting to get back into the writing mood for this might I suggest watching something kinda sad or angsty? It works pretty well for me. Heck even reading a sad story might get you into the mood. Anyway I just hope you continue this soon.
M. Illusion chapter 6 . 8/13/2015
WOOOooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I love this! And...no I'm too tired to give anything better. I can't wait until next the chapter! Hopefully it won't be too long, considering how long it's been... Hopefully.
M. Illusion chapter 5 . 8/12/2015
Wait, so IS he what she thinks he is? I was kinda hoping it wasn't that...sad...

Oh wait, this is a tragedy. Of course it's that sad. Still, I always liked stories where Phantom isn't Fenton. Of course, I usually look for stories where they meet, or they both, ya know, exist, but this has a similar feel anyway.
LOVE IT.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2015
Why didn't Maddie think of home schooling Danny, the problem of 'social interaction' due to his energy drain is a simple fix. She could simply forge all of his work, when needed of course. I'm also looking forward to seeing when Jack finally does something horrible to Danny that just (almost)completely destroys any faith Danny had in his family (mother included)
M. Illusion chapter 2 . 8/12/2015
What's goin' on? What's goin' on? I NEED TO KNOW BUT I WANT TO DRAG THIS OUT SO BAD. Aaahhhh, I don't know what to do... X)

I wanna see into Danny's head, that's what I wanna do.
M. Illusion chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
O-O
I
I need to read more.
..Why are there only six chapters?

...WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER?

I-I think I'll read one chapter every now and a while, so it lasts as long as possible. Wow. This idea...I mean this idea isn't unheard of, but people don't tend to write good ideas very well. But YOU... YOU. You. *points at you* You.
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