awwwwwwwwww i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

im crying 3

Mistakes in this chapter

-Harry already knew Daphne's middle name

-Harry asked if she had brothers or sister and she said no. Astoria has already been introduced. It's a super strange and irritating error.

That said, I am greatly enjoying the story so far. Thank you for the hard work you put into it

It would be hilariously brilliant if the DA was instead named something like "Wedding Planners." I'm just imagining Harry, Daphne, Neville, Tracey, and a bunch of others all being "caught," only they pull out the wedding catalogue issues of Witch Weekly and are all "why, Professor Umbridge, what a surprise! Perhaps you could tell me, which looks better: periwinkle or Cassandra blue?"

Ah, so I see you have an explanation for the repeated requests for Harry to be Neville's best man. I withdraw my earlier correction about it.

Absolutely loving the gradual buildup of Harry and Daphne's relationship. I am also enthralled with how you handle the dramatic tension between Harry, Ron, and Hermione and their difficulty in getting along with Harry's fiance. Just another minor nitpick to point out though. Here Neville asks Harry to be his best man at his and Tracey's wedding as if for the first time; this had already been covered in chapter 17.

so gooooodd

Oh nooooo not Arthur! :'( I hope this means you've at least kept Sirius and/or Remus alive!

This was a nice, solid block of a chapter. I'm just going to point out one little nitpick: Harry asks Daphne what her middle name is, but she already told him that when they met on the train back in Chapter 4. It's a minor detail when compared to all the awesomeness, and I look forward to the next steps in their relationship.

I really love your story, I think that it is really well written. But right now I can't get over Millicent. What a. I'm sorry. I'm just mad

Love it. I actually read it more then once. Too bad there isnt a second one where harry experience farherhood and his marriage with daphne.

This was a great story, despite my critiques. The writing was excellent and the plot pretty well done.

Dumbledore is a good guy and Harry forgives him his every failing. Voldemort is a cartoon bad guy (like canon) but isn’t very bright.

I liked the rivalry between Hermione and Daphne. It is identical to an older sister thinking that her brother’s wife is not good enough for him.

Ron is a bell end but improves. Ditto Fudge.

Neville and Tracy are highlights.

Recommended.

Millicent was stupid. The Malfoys now have a very good reason to kill her and her family.

On the other hand, Draco was probably planning it anyway.

Harry proves he’s an idiot again.

Ron was never really a friend anyway. He was a user from day one (the candy v. sandwich switch).