I hope you don't give up on this story. You write so we'll, I'm envious. Your version of Mass Effect is what I wish had actually been the one bioware made. I've read the trilogy and I'll be following this one should you decide to finish it. The only element I miss from your story is that of EDI finding a body. I thought you would bring her into the story and pair her up with a character that would have surprised your readers as she tries to explore her new life. But even without EDI, I love your writing. Hope you come back

I guess after a year with no updates, this story is dead also. Another removed from my ever shrinking follow list.

Hope you're ok dude. I'd love another chapter but take your time if need be.

Hey dude, hope we are getting a new chapter soon. I love this story to bits!

The whole bit of Shepard yelling at Joker was very well written.

Wow! That was a lot loaded into a small chapter! I still hope Udina survives, and I bet the Blue Suns has a field day with the cerberus toads! Poor Lia, I hope she will be ok also. I can understand Shepard's frustration and anger though. Anyhow, well done, and eagerly awaiting the next update!

Yo, my guy! Are you gonna post another chapter soon?

Loved it can't wait to read more.

Good to have you back!

So good

Quick update...thanx for that. A great chapter started off light then got serious. I hope Udina makes it you actually made him likable in a believable way. Glad to see you save Grunt for another day and the way you did it was Krogan appropriate. Thankyou for your time and effort to entertain the masses.

Kal'Reegar, ya just gotta love him! Good on him, for the Quarian, and Geth people! A nice proposal from "just" a Marine that "just" shoots things! I like your Javik much better. Did you make it cannon that the Protheans didn't know of the Quarians, or Javik just doesn't realize that Lia, and therefore Tali are Quarian? That appears a real shame about Udina, you really made me like him! If he is gone, he went out a hero, fitting your character! I can't say I'm happy about Weyrlock Shukkad's sacrifice, but he did what needed done, and saved Grunt in the process! What a Krogan would consider a good death I'm thinking. Amazing chapter, well done, and eagerly awaiting the next update!

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Anytime

Another amazing update so very soon since the last! Amazing story, and character interaction! I can't say I'll miss Linron, I still don't like her at all. Now I hope both Grunt and Udina make it. Please keep up the awesome work, and very eagerly awaiting the next update!