Reviews for Shocking Surprises |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Noice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting to say the least, I guess I can kinda see the pairing possibly of Yang and Neptune. Inventive with the shock collar to say the least. Question, is this meant to be a pure smut story or does it have more of an overarching plot. Either way, it's well done and I hope to see more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh... |
![]() ![]() Not that I didn't enjoy the smut WAY more than I should have but the first paragraph is my favourite thing about this fanfic and for some reason it was 100% funnier bc I forgot what you are talking about when you mentioned the whole pummeling Ren with a turkey and I just pictured Yang beating Ren up with a turkey |
![]() ![]() ![]() MMMmhmmmmm, yes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want more *whimpers* More NeptuneXYang smut Pwese? Make it longer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue... You are one of the few scald writers here you will continue. Or you will suffer. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW...O.o this was...hot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would have thought that Neptune would be rough in bed. considering that Poseidon/Neptune was known for causing earthquakes or was it just Poseidon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing chapter as always. so...i wonder what the next story will contain? anyway, keep up the good work as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoop another Yang/Neptune fic :) I liked the whole, "Ruby can't know" :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() mmm well, its was cool |