The tension and the kinda-resolution at the end was quietly brilliant. The Lemon scene ranks among the top five I have ever read to date.

You know you are the reason. .

i dont like reading lemons but this was just amazing

Oh man, those first four chapters were so awkward and painful. Thank god they started over and made up in ch 5!

That's it. Hands down. Best writer ever wrote the best story ever. I am such a perv and I fucking love it! If I wasn't I wouldn't be able to laud your hot, heavy and yet emotional sex chapters. Is like the fanfiction of my dreams. You know how you wished an anime turned out the way you wanted but either it didn't or it was left hanging in the air? Well this is exactly how I wished it would have gone between them. Man now I got a problem on my own to take care of. I think you made me realize how much into kinky stuff I am D:, I mean electricity? Hand cuffs? Gags? Hell yeah!

damn that was hot

Ugh Another review. As a writer I know how much they mean, so thanks for another story.

Enjoyed every damn second of this. I have read through your other stories and it just shows how strong your writing skills are, being able to write action but make this smut as passionately, but still rough, as possible. One this that I absolutely love to no end is how you wrote Hei to be unselfish lover. He is a true gentleman in bed, always seemingly putting her release before his. This really was incredibly sweet to read. Nonetheless, this was incredibly well written NSFW piece. I'm a huge perv(NO SHAME!) but this was detailed wonderfully so it wasn't just about the physical aspect of sex, but also the emotional connections. Thank you for the great piece!

Lewd

GAME OVER...
YOU WIN.

That's it. You win at Hei and Misaki. There are no ifs, ands, or buts.
You cranked it up to 11 on this. It was hot, heavy, in character, and yet oh-so sentimental at the end.

You are the master, and I am not worthy. (Hear the Karate Kid Quote "Bow to your sensei!")

orz

I'mma go back and read it again. Sweet Christ on a Cracker. I'm TOAST.

Somehow, this part was better than the previous!

As someone else would say, THE FEELS!
YES! Electrical pleasure. Loved it!
Amazing, Amazing! The way they realized they could trust each other. I loved how in depth you got with their feelings.
Even though he was more brutal, he still was sweet, making sure she was fine.
Let's just hope Astronomics couldn't pinpoint his activity to her bedroom. ;)
Stupendous story! Loved it so much! Thanks for writing it.

It's also a good thing Hei doesn't have a payment for using his powers... kind of suck if he had to sing or something after _that_! Lovely way of expressing their exchanging of dominance and vulnerabilities and I liked how it ended with him expressing hope for a future for them.
I really enjoy your writing and look forward to more of anything you choose to write.

What a climax! I loved every word of it. Now I just can't stop imagining the rest of Section 4 barging into her apartment, after seeing the star report and narrowing down the location, and finding the two of them together. Thank you so much for this wonderful story -

This was really well written. I love how you use the lemon scenes to explore all the tangled up emotions going on between Misaki and Hei; her need to be vulnerable, his need to be trusted, and the way they try to balance their love for each other while they are being pulled in two different directions. I adored the symbolism of the mask and the lace underwear.

"He rubbed the exact spot on her back that had been hurting her all day. How had he known that it hurt?" - O_O -little tear

"It's been a long time since somebody trusted me the way you do." - O_O -well now I'm just depressed.