Great story so far! I'm glad to see that Naruto is learning some sealing jutsu, even if it's just basic stuff right now. Aside from Tenten's weapons and Orochimaru's curse marks sealing is practically non-existent in all of Naruto, so it's a nice treat to see it added to someone's fanfic story. Really eager to know what would've happened when Naruto and Tayuya met.
Sad to see the story hasn't been updated in almost 4 years now. It seems like all the good ones get abandoned instead of being finished.

I know I've only read this chapter, but this story sound really good! You should make more like this!

mhm interesting that tayuya will be an uzumaki in this story sicne her hair isnt red on the anime manga its acutally pink-ish

Seems like Tayuya is afraid of not being able to find her heritage, being a slave to whoever has her in their grasp and loneliness, but then again I could be really off. Anyway, hoping that she meets naruto soon.

Awesome. Can't wait for more.

Dam the suspense in CH. 8 is unreal, I wonder what's going to happen next.

Hope you update soon,

Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D

No problem just take your time and easy on yourself life can be better as we know it also I'll be looking forward to read next chapter.

thanks for the update!

Yay! You're back! And with a neat chapter on top of it!
I was already scared that the fic had been abandoned. Luckily, you didn't. Though personal matters always take priority. Depressions aren't that fun to deal with, to say the least, so I hope you've managed to climb out of that darkness.

Keep up the great work!

Good to see you back.

Naruto will be crap as in the anime ?

A well done chapter. A lot is taking place now with Naruto learning something new and finding out the Mind's Eye ability as well as the turmoil that Tayuya feels. The two know nothing about each other her and still won't as they will be going separate ways once more. Gaara has a bad feeling and it is understandable with the Akatsuki moving out and about and we notice two of them heading to Suna. Danzo has his own plans in place and I am unsure of what he thinks of Tayuya or better yet what he can do with her as she has Uzumaki blood in her veins. Things will tie together soon I am sure. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Well overall, a rather interesting chapter. Good work here. I really hope though that you deviate from canon by not having the Ichibi extracted from Gaara.

Not that I'm trying to pressure you or anything. Just a little tired of seeing everyone do the same thing over and over again with regards to that. But you do whatever you have planned.

Keep up the good work!

Finally finished, I have to say I enjoyed my time reading the fic. I like how the characterization is going between Naruto and Tayuya. I also like to repeat how you portray Tayuya's personality, keep it up.