I just LOVED when Weiss Tickled Ruby! You should write more whiterose tickle scenes more often! PLEASSSSEEEEEE! I absolutely love them!

Sooo. *Cough* last post was October 2014... When's the update?

Naive Blake is best Blake. All knowing Blake isn't that great

I was going to say something about the way everyone was. Weiss is still the same, somewhat with Ruby. But I did notice that Blake was a bit naive, and Yang was the little sister role some. I don't know how to put it. Hmm, how about this, Yang is basically the little sister to Ruby's big sister, although they are their respective ages. Though, that may have been just a was of showing Ruby has as much control of Yang as Yang does of Ruby. I'm going to stop typing now.

This is great

plz don't do a chapter on what yang and blake were doing... the first fanfic of rwby i ever read... lets just say the author very detaily talked about zwei and blake getting busy.

yang is athena. so does that mean shes a thought? -comment if you understood the joke-

weiss needs to stop being a wuss. surely she will understand that? i am worried about her.

awwww poor Weiss

The ending was funny.

Great story.

Wasn't Weiss suppose to be a vegetarian in this story? So why does she have Beef?

I actually want to read a story about a really possessive Penny and Ruby now. Would be so fun to read.

To be honest I think you had them take too long to confess to one another had like three plans and by the time it happened I stopped caring. The Blake and Ruby one would have been perfect.

The Princess Bride is such an incredible movie.

I remember when I was younger I took inconceivable as a word I used for all the time.

Nice story