Yep, I was right about the Danny whump. Bad guy saw him get angry and made him #5. Poor Danny was hurt so badly and really thought he was going to die. It was so close. That would be terrifying.

I'm glad nobody told Grace why her Danno was targeted because if she knew his anger was a reason then she would never forgive herself.

I hope you write more Danny stories. Season 7 has brought the bromance back but its still fun to read good fanfics.

Oops, accidentally hit send. Now I'm nervous for our beloved Danny if bad guy witnessed him wrathfully pounding on the car. Oh boy, I sense Danny whump. Yay. It's the only whump like to read/watch .

Oh wow. How did you come up with this idea? This is awesome. Now both Steve and Danny got angry at each other but Danny let his anger show outside where Mr badguy is watching so now im nervous for

An enjoyable Danny whump story with a unique plot. Well done.

Loved this story. Sigh. So good. You write the Five O really well. Hoping for more from you soon...

Well done. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. The storyline was complex and yet the story didn't drag. You kept it moving very well. Interesting theme and tastefully presented. Plus any story with some good Danny scenes are extra special.

Just read this story and enjoyed it. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

Just started reading this story and I love it so far. I noticed you used Piikoi Street as the street the Harrington's live on. I believe this is the same street that Steve lives on in the Series (2727 Piikoi Street?). Was this intentional for them to both live on the same street, just wondering. Hoping to finish this story later tonight after the 6th season premier.

Really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing.

Oh god, I'm not that evil, am I? I didn't mean to manipulate you... XD
I thought this was a fitting ending. It was wonderful to see Miriam finally moving past some of her guilt, and that conversation was Charlotte was a lovely read. I'm glad Joseph was put away for life, so he can't threaten Miriam, or hurt anyone else, again.
It's been wonderful to read this! I'm sad it's over, but I'm looking forward to seeing more stories from you!

Amazing chapter update

Great story with a great ending - good job x

Amen to that AcGEM. Amen to THAT!

No,no,no not yet the ending. Got to see more of Danny, Steve and Grace. Ok so you did some good bromance scenes during the course of this story so I won't chide you that much.

I like fan fiction stories because they break away from the show, which is often boring and redundant. I like reading something that breaks out of that mould. Some people complain that FF writers don't follow the shows' terminology or expressions and I say GOOD! That's what makes them delightful to read; otherwise it's just like on TV; same investigations, same language (often it goes over your head and you DON'T CARE!), same 'where were you yesterday?' and bla bla bla. We want to see interaction between the main characters; the ones we actually care about, not necessarily 'business as usual', which is why I'm not watching H50 anymore.

Keep up the good work...YOUR work!

You did a good job, though I would have liked an ending with some Steve-Danny bromance. Perhaps next time?