Reviews for To Fix what is Broken
Malchus-Fireheart chapter 4 . 2/8
One of the best fics I’ve ever read. Deep, emotional and to be honest horrifying. The characters were all brilliantly written and the story was fast pasted from beginning to end. 10/10
Rach172 chapter 4 . 5/17/2018
Bg7gbijjhhhujk9bjknhuujnj7hn9kmmmmmmmMhxtfDHXTTBVYUBUIMHKHCFNNMMMJH7JNMMNBGaaaaaadgAsssaaaAaaaaaaaaaashhhhgggggggg! SO MUCH EMOTION! SO MUCH FEELS! I JUST WANNA GIVE ROCKET A HUG! GAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! I REALLY WANNA RIP THOSE SPACE-JERKS ARMS OFF AND MAKE EM EAT IT!

*A couple of deep soothing breaths later*

Okay now that the ranting is out of the way... This has been one of the most intense and amazing fics I've read so far! The way you write the characters is spot on, the hurt and emotion is real(you nearly had me sniffling a couple of times there) and just the way that you describe everything is simply beautiful!

I hope that I'll see a new chapter soon, Rocket must be comforted after all! Keep up your splendid work!
Arcane Draconian chapter 4 . 12/4/2017
That was an intense and heartbreaking story but also one filled with the love and determination of a close family. I think you wrote this brilliantly, you have a way of describing thoughts, feelings, and scenes beautifully. I would of loved to have seen what happens next but I understand that real life can get in the way. Regardless it's a great fanfic made with some clever ideas so well done.
Death to Barbie 0206 chapter 4 . 9/9/2017
Please update before I commit suicide over not knowing what happens next
Guest chapter 4 . 9/5/2017
UPDAAAATTTTEEEE PLEEEAAAASEEE...I KNOW YOU'RE NOT GONE FROM HERE YOUR PROFILE SAYS IT WAS UPDATED IN AUGUST THIS YEAR, SO WHY DON'T YOU UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE?
bookworm563 chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
Wow, well, that chapter was intense and filled with angst! This was really well written, im guessing you have much experience kn writing. The details were spectacular and you expressed the emotions and thoughts perfectly! Great job!
Autumnights chapter 4 . 1/10/2015
I love the way you are writing this. There's so much fanfiction that's telling instead of showing. Yours is mostly showing, which keeps me guessing about what's really going on. I love it. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!
Book girl fan chapter 4 . 1/4/2015
It's going to take him a very long time to realise this isn't a dream.
Ama-chan chapter 4 . 1/3/2015
... because he's a tree XD...it's 5am and I'm going to blame you for waking my neighbors with my laughter.

On another note, this is a beautifully written story! I'm a bit of a hurt/comfort nut so this really appealed to me:) You do a marvelous job of making THEM seem really scary. Something that speaks to your deepest fears? *shudder*
Your narrative and descriptions are very well done; you had me at the edge of my seat through most of this. Please do continue! I've been waiting a long time for this update and was beginning to lose hope!

Ama-chan
nuke-squid chapter 4 . 12/31/2014
It was awesome and amazing, so please update soon
GrezzWizard chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
This make the cake. Oh Goodness this is perfection all in a chapter wrapped in a emotional story that make Rocket ten times more likable then in the film. Idk about the comics because I never read them and the comics don't sell in my country.
GrezzWizard chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
Shit, that last part with Rocket got to me! How did they even manage to get the forms of the other Guardians in the first place? Why do this? What's their motive? Monsters aren't born their made. (Once Upon A Time reference) Stuff is going down!
GrezzWizard chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
I want Rocket to be emotional, so please break him or let him feel love from an OC, maybe? To have someone more then family or friends.
WerewolvesAreReal chapter 4 . 12/25/2014
The characters are just perfect in this. And I feel like hugging Rocket forever, which I think is the only appropriate response to this. Eek. Looking forward to the 'comfort' part of this story, because this is heartbreaking/agonizing. On that note, I commend your ability to torture your characters (and your readers)
Thanks for posting :)
The Lupine Sojourner chapter 4 . 12/25/2014
Aww...poor Rocket! That...was...intense! My feels were hurt during the reading of this chapter!
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