intresting story.

This story was beautifully disturbing and stayed with me afterwards. I love the darkness in your stories because it feels like a real place. But your darkness also insinuates the kind of hope (or relief) you feel after crying. Very provoking, you have deepened the more casual world of the anime into more complete and sensory dimensions. There is poetry in a story like yu-gi-oh, nice of you to draw it out.

Amazing!

Strange dar, of shadow and shifting meaning, and a strange beauty. A very ark and rather frightening fic, but your writing ability carries it up and over that darkness, and creates something truly stunning.

~Rhelle

*.* Man, that was intense...I think I recignized the original cast, though...Yami Bakura, Yami Yuugi, Anzu, Joey, can't figure out the other blonde, Seto, Mokuba...who -is- the other blonde, anyway?

Anywayz, this was really cool, in character, nicely deetailed and described, and leaves enough enigmatic stiff to leave the reader thinking. Really cool! Love the ending.

wow, this was an awesome story! there were some parts i didn't really understand though, because i'm just getting into egyptian mythology. but wow. i loved it! you're an awesome writer, and sometimes when i read your work, all i can do is gape in awe at how you phrase and write things. BRAVO! lol _~

Damn good writing, it makes you really feel sorry for the people in the fiction though, the fact that even in death you must sacrifice is a bit of a scary thought. You did good work, the mythology was a great aspect. You just had to end it there though didn't you? Keeps you thinking too much. Write more stuff even if it's not a continuation of this, you are a brilliant writer.

holy smokes you are good!

Loyatly is a Sixpence without Affection

is my first fanfic that i wrote a week ago

PleasE! forgive me for my inaccuracy!

but heed the fact that im only a little 5'3

twelve year old chinese canadian girl who just began !

Gah. Gah gah gah.

(My way of saying that this rocked.)

This really was spectacular. You did a good job with the mythology, the characters, the description...everything. Honestly. I just sat and blinked at the screen in awe.

Though I have to say again about the skeleton: yick.

this is very, very good. I doubt I've ever read another fic that combined Bakura's (or anyone else's, for that matter) Egyptian past to thier character traits quite so well (or so accuratly)

... wow. Very good. This sort of possibility for Yami Bakura hadn't ever even occured to me - could be that I only know enough Egyptian Mythology to understand this, not enough to write something like this myself. _ Anyway, very cool and original fic.

His heart, eh? ... Yeah.

Good stuff. _

~Sam

This is your BEST fanfic so far I'd have to say. I just love reading your fics about Ancient Egypt because you always seem to weave the culture in there PERFECTLY. Bakura was great in this. Don't feel quite as sorry for him as I should thought... _~ Hm... so... the people I recognized was Jounouchi and... was that Malik in there? And of course Seto and Mokuba...

Keep up the good work!

Ayod Botla