Reviews for Kiiroi Senkou |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story... not overpowered (gradually and through a process at least) and reasonable. please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story this is so original of course I haven't read many t rated stories I mainly focus on m rated but this is amazing so far cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() great chapter, update soon. im liking this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know I suddenly feel bad for those pirates (just a little bit but still) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a bad chapter. Good fight against cannon fodder |
![]() ![]() Oh I almost forgotten...are you going to allow Naruto to learn and master Hasshoken? I thought Rokushiki was cool but Hasshoken was awesome, such as inflicting extreme shockwaves at your opponents through punches and kick. You could of course allow Naruto to become an expert in both Rokushiki and Hasshoken, making him a deadly and formidable fighter on his own. |
![]() ![]() In this story had ranked Naruto as among the Supernova 11 or Worst Generation, pirates that were famous for their abilities and earn a bounty over 100,000,000 berries before entering the New World. What is Naruto's relationship is going to be with these pirates as well as his relationship with the Marines and the World Government? And which one piece girl is Naruto going go out with? My money would be Nami. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh cool power from sasuke. So he's not a dpuche here? Good. Yay first member acquired. Naruto will gain Haki latter then I assume. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once he reaches Sabaody Archipelago what is Naruto's strength level is compare with the rest of the members of the Supernova 11? What sort of fighting skills will he learned...Hasshoken or Rokushiki? Who's going to be in his pirate crew? And will he learned Haki alongside Luffy under Silvers Rayleigh after the Whitebeard War? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet chapter. I hope for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() By the way good story, Can't wait for the next chapter.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() replace itachi with Sasuke.. Itachi make a better first mate than Sasuke |
![]() ![]() Could you make Naruto's first mate be Itachi? That'll be cool right? Naruto being called 'Captain'.. Because Sasuke is a bastard and won't call Naruto captain... This is a request please... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im glad you updated this, I was afraid youx given up on the story, I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far. |