Well, that's a cliff hanger.

Teach Hiccup what? Right now, I'm seeing Hiccup snd Merida both as victims.

Please tell me you're not gonna pair Hiccup and Merida, are you?

That's Hiccup for ya. Knows how to use sacastic quips and dry statements to his advantage.

This fic is legit !
Honestly, it's very nice to read a modern AU that isn't unrealistic or badly written.
The way you wrote Jack is also very refreshing, most people are so "biased" that they make him this unsufferable bratty Marty Sue ...

GOSH I LOVE IT DO UPDATE SOON~~~

i like how Rapunzel was a bit awkward and uncomfortable in the situation, a lot of writers ignore the effects of isolation like hers. you're doing really well, and im excited to see where all this is going :)

Great chapter :-D

*Sighs* Hiccup's gonna be forever alone. Poor guy. :'(

I feel bad for Hiccup. Keeps getting attacked and accused for no reason. What's with him and attractive, tough, violent and temperamental women? Fate seems to have them revolve around each other. lol XD

This is a great example of quality over quantity!

I'm really liking this! Very interesting and the characters are enjoyable and loyal to their movie counter-parts. It's also written very well!

Waiting for next time!

I really like where this story is going so far! Please continue with it! And, I don't think you should feel embarrassed about it; you seem to have a gift for writing! Plus, the interactions between the characters actually seem very on point which is really nice! Thank you for sharing this story with all of us! :)

Nice start! Looking forward to reading some more :-)

This is nice man. Keep it up :D