Reviews for Just a Ring Away |
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Sophie chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 Squeee! |
leslietendo chapter 1 . 1/19/2016 I can't stop reading the ending over and over :'v 3 I just loved it! , u should do a second part UwU! |
Mangaka Shuzen chapter 1 . 10/21/2015 This is awesome0.0 I love it so much |
Ba-sing-saying chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 I saw this fic in a tumblr post of good soma fics and realized once I started it that I had read it before and loved it. I reread it and loved it all over again. Great job on the writing and the characterization- I can totally see Soul as a grumpy-looking video store clerk, and as warm on the inside as he seems cold on the outside. I also really liked how Maka kept putting off picking her phone up. I could see her as punctual and careful, but also willing to procrastinate and put something off because it's convenient for her, in this case to keep talking to her new friend. This fic was adorable, especially the ending, and I really enjoyed it. Great job! |
SunBinamra chapter 1 . 6/10/2015 That was so sweet! Great job as always. |
Shinza chapter 1 . 6/7/2015 That was a very sweet one-shot :) I liked the whole 'i lost my phone but don't wanna lose the conversations' ordeal, and if it wasn't for the phone, they would never have talked to one another. This was very cute ~~ |
fantsyfreak chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 Cute! |
comic-book-freak-22 chapter 1 . 1/3/2015 that was adorable |
videogamenerd101 chapter 1 . 12/24/2014 omg this was really cute. i really like how well you developed maka and soul's relationship throughout the story, and it was really cute and sweet to read their interactions. my only criticism is that i recommend condensing the writing some more because i felt like if you didn't directly state some of the characters' feelings, it would've made the story better. still, this story was really really cute and enjoyable as a whole. great job, jak! |
ShadeWarrior chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 This so super cute! Much adorbs! |
BlazeMary chapter 1 . 11/6/2014 Best one shot ever , I usually only read long ass stories but I'm glad I read this one . Cheers. |
ilarual chapter 1 . 11/1/2014 HOW have I never read this before? I thought I'd read all your stuff but apparently not because this is PRECIOUS. |
Don'trlyknow chapter 1 . 10/20/2014 So fluffy! |
dftere chapter 1 . 10/6/2014 Adorable, this was. :3 |
sgt.karenbear chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 Awwwwww that was super cute! And I loved the way you had Soul and Maka conversate at the end! |