| Reviews for A new beginning |
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   TigrezzTail chapter 5 . 4/5 Heh, Danzo may have finally gone too far and done something to get himself noticed. |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 5 . 4/5 I like it! |
| buterflypuss chapter 5 . 4/5 good chap, but ive gotta wonder why Naruto/Akio would think Gaara would be born at this point when Gaara was clearly born the same year as him (or at least close to the same year, i could see him being a year older/younger) and that didn't happen till shortly after the current war ended...if my math is right temari (the oldest) is either recently born or around a year old at this point |
| TigrezzTail chapter 4 . 11/27/2019 Ah, good to know there won't be any cataclismic reactions between current and future Kurama. So, how's his mother going to react to their house guest? |
| buterflypuss chapter 4 . 11/25/2019 good chap |
| darkpegasuzz chapter 4 . 11/25/2019 Nice |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 4 . 11/25/2019 I really like it |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 10/30/2019 I like it |
| Lightningblade49 chapter 3 . 10/29/2019 Sarutobi a straight troll sticking him under his parents roof but it would be what he needs to help with the trauma. |
| ThelittleKing chapter 3 . 10/29/2019 Man, I was really looking forward to this fic but I just hate when Naruto gets a new name and look. |
| laurajustin chapter 3 . 10/29/2019 Great story! Can't wait for the next update! |
| CrypticSilhouette chapter 14 . 9/22/2019 I understand now. You set up in one world but are writing about a different one, with little explanation on how you went from A to B. Dropping titles like ‘Hokage’ and ‘triple S rank’ mean nothing of the character you’re writing about is nothing like that. |
| CrypticSilhouette chapter 11 . 9/22/2019 ... Naruto was the Hokage... this is Orochimaru, 19 years ago. Again, I simply don’t understand the matchups. |
| CrypticSilhouette chapter 8 . 9/22/2019 I think that by limiting everyone’s power, you’ve made what happened before the time travel impossible. If that was the extent of his power he’d have been decimated by something that could annihilate the entirety of the alliance. Just a lil lopsided, if you ask me. |
| storyteller73 chapter 12 . 5/16/2019 There should be no pairing, be reasonable. Not because your writing fanfiction but if Naruto has traveled back in time as you say and not to an alternate Universe then he shouldn't be in any relationship with anyone from the pass. He's already throwing a lot of things out of order with his presence in the pass. Imagine what will happen when the Naruto for that timeline is born? I also think your placing characters out of time, Gaara is the same age as Naruto and the other rookies so that means they were born after the war ended when Minato was the hokage. The kids born during the war are Itachi and his age group, I'm not sure Tamari was born when you stated or that she know Sasori of the red sand personally. Question: Will Akio/Naruto disappear when Kushina give birth to the Naruto of that timeline? |
