Oof that epilogue hit me right in the feels and I wasn’t expecting it after how fluffy the last chapter wasn ;

You need to reword this makes no sense "Most everyone lives between ten to twenty minutes from there, although some families live even further"
You can either write it as:
1. Everyone lives between
OR
2. Most people lives between

I hate you for writing that story, but I love you for writing that story. I love how Sam is a part of their family, I love Carter, but most of all I love how Dean and Marah are so believable. You've taken the person Dean can be, and gave him the love he deserved in her. But then you tore that all away, because that's just what life does. It's not fair, and it hurts so bad that sometimes you can't see how the world will ever continue after. I hate the ending, but I hate it because it's true. And because it's true, I also love it, because in this story, it happened. We've already seen the story where it doesn't, but I have to hope that love lived is better than love lost. Well done. I may not be the same person for having read this, and I thank you for that.

Noooooo! I am crying really ugly tears right now.
That was such a beautiful story and my heart can’t take it!

I don't cry easy, but this last chapter let the tears flow! Great story! Can feel all the effort you put into it with the true emotion shining through. Couldn't imagine a better way to emulate true love. Amazing Job!

Oh my gosh. This was beautiful. Tears streaming down my face this last chapter. I loved it. Thanks so much for sharing your story! :)

Uuuuugh nooooo That epilogue broke me! :(

Okay... So I'm willing to bet that a lot of people have told you this, but I'm being 100% serious. I'm sitting on my bed in tears. I don't think I'll ever be able to forgive for that. It was amazing. The story... How Dean and Marah's relationship developed. I think it surprised everyone when she had Carter. I was so happy... If you want the truth I completely forgot that they are fictional characters. The only thing keeping me from locking myself in my room, eating ice cream, and crying all day is the fact that this is a Supernatural fanfic. People die... People come back. Marah's done it once she can do it again. That thought is keeping me sane right now. I'm clutching to that little piece of hope that she will appear on Dean's doorstep one day. That was just so well written that when it ends like that it's not some think that you take easily. Other than the ending that makes me want to cry all day... I loved it.

did you count the round bean shoots from the clip that's just weird I hope you didn't.

This was just... So beautiful. I can't describe how much this story gave me feels. I cried as I read the last chapter. Thank you for such an amazing story.

She died?! Tears. I am crying so many tears!

Your story here is a beautiful thing. You made me feel what the characters felt. The last chapter had me in tears. I loved it please keep writing!

Brilliant story! Made me cry like a baby with that ending! Family thought something was seriously wrong seeing as I was reading it in the car!

Great story!

Where the shell did you learn to kill all my feels?! You are an AMAZING writer. Please keep doing this. Get published. You're amazing. This was so well done. I loved it.