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I just found this story and it was beautifully written

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Omg your story is really captivating! im not sure why it took me so long to find your story but you have great writing skills. I can easily imagine the story as you tell it. It would help if you tag klaus and bonnie if you want more reviews.
As for the story please fo continue its looks very promising.
Wish you ths best

"He laid her in a sea of gold" has to be one of my favorite lines EVER in a klonnie fic. Your writing is so clear and sensual with delightfully surprising instances of poetic flare, and the dialogue is simple and heated. You've established such palpable chemistry between Klaus and Bonnie in a single chapter that by the time I got to the pool scene I was holding my breath to see what would happen. You have a great eye for sensuous details like the color of her dress and the change in Klaus' eyes. And for Klaus to see Bonnie as full of light, and to see her as a chance at redemption is one of my all time favorite story lines for them. PLEASE continue this intriguing and sexy fic!

Amazing! There needs to be more Klaus/Bonnie fics in this world. They're super hot together.

this so fanstastic

Please continue, this was brilliant.

oh wow. oh wow oh wow oh wow. this was lovely. i wish i had a better comment then that but it really is. i love how they're trying to resist each other in the beginning but they just can't help themselves in end. and goddamn, you have my favorite line of them i've read in a LONG time: "talking had never been either's strong suit but together they found conversation in silence." YES.
this is amazing and lovely and hit all the klonnie spots. :)

I truly enjoyed reading this, it's awesome, I love it! I hope you continue with this! Thanks for posting ;)