Great story!

Thanks for the emotional rollercoaster you've put me through, from the "Oh shit!" plot twists to the brawling my eyes out at 3 am in the morning on a school day. It's been a long time since I've read a well-written story that could move the reader's feelings so well. I applaud you for being an excellent author for every word placed is there for a reason and when you dropped a plot twist I would think back and remember the some dialogue from previous chapters. Thank you for writing this masterpiece!

Amazing story ! My favorite !
Thank you so much

That is amazing! I can't really find a word that can exactly describe by feelings (well, partly because my vocabulary isn't rich enough XD ) The ending is so lovely and so sweet I can even picture the happy life this little family's gonna have Thank you sooooooooo much for bringing us such a lovely story

Gaaaah. This is just perfect! Right from how maternal Ariadne is (even after an almost meltdown) down to the reunion. Best. Part. Ever.

I love that Ariadne confessed about her guilt, about not returning to Arthur even after all the pieces came into place. They are both too selfless, heck they both deserved each other indeed. And I also love that at the end of the day, even if staying apart is easier for so many reasons, what matters is what you really want-and that is to be together. Happiness trumps all! Happy endings trump all! Suck it Eames. LOL I kid, I kid.

AND THAT REUNION. GUUUHHHH.

I will definitely miss this story and of course! We wouldnt say no to more Talesco family stories! It's also nice to read that Arthur reunited with his parents. Thank you for this wonderful story! Really made my day. :)

You don't know how happy I am right now :D I'm such a sucker for happy endings and this was such a perfect one. I really did think she was just going to be single the rest of her life and spend it with the kids. So glad that her and Arthur are back together and expecting another child :')
You write family fics soooooooo well and true I love Chloe and Ender too :) So please carry on this storyline with the one shots, it would be wonderful to read them every now and then between your upcoming fics or maybe we could have another family fic?
Can't wait to see what you've got lined up next :) xx

Oh my goodnes ...this chapter this ending literally made me melt to goop.
Honestly you couldn't have made it better. This was amazing!
But i am crying too...because I'll miss them all so much. Ender and Chloe were amazing. I will miss themthem dearly.
Leaving Eames out was a wise decision.
I can't thank you enough for this story :-)
As far as continuing this story goes...well that's upto you.
Thank you so very much

I'M SO HAPPY FDJSAKLFJDSIOAFSDJLFJRIOAFDKLSFSALJDAIOFJESLDKJDSIAOFJDSALKFJ.

and yes I will read Talesco oneshots. YES.

You made me so happy again. I was hoping for good ending, but this is fantastic ending :) I am so glad that Ariadne finally accepted her feelings towards him and gave him another chance. That scene with children was so hilarious. I can't believe that Ari is pregnant. YAY! Best ending ever :) And you are right, no one cares about Eames :D Your idea is cool. Please, please, please continue with one-shots. I don't want it to end :)

(PS. I know that I didn't write reviews a lot lately, but I am very emotional person. And when I am reading such a heartbreaking stories or chapters as yours (believe me, you are cruel) I can't write it, because I will have those feelings again. And sometimes it just breaks my heart. I can't believe that someone can write such a believable and beautiful story. I admire you for that. :)

That did escalate fast. I agree with Ender insofar as that Ariadne is being cowardly, but I also can't blame her since she has every right to fear her heart being broken again. I'm also glad that Arthur conceded and didn't press the issue. That's love; letting her go despite your heartbreak and trusting that you'll find your way back to each other. If he pressured her, their reconciliation would always be clouded by guilt. She still loves him, she just needs to learn how to be in love with him again. I feel like now isn't the best time, but I have every faith they will reconcile eventually. After all, nothing is sexier than watching a man be a wonderful, loving and attentive father. I'm going to keep my fingers crossed for Ariadne to fall in love with the new man Arthur has become. I know your readers already have

I
CAN'T
BREATHE
Your writing has always been pretty dang close to perfection and on more that one occasion made me tear up. Their family dynamic is amazing, and I'm loving the way you flesh out Ender and Chloe's characters. Can't can't can't wait for the next chapter!

(i'm so sorry but this stupid phone is useless. This is the last part I swear.)

With that, I'm just looking forward to how you'll end this story. If they dont end up together fine (as long as it's not with stupid Eames) because I think realistically that is really the way their problems are heading. But I do hope Ariadne has some sort of catharsis during her "break." She's no saint in this story after all. They both aren't.

Looking forward to your future stories as well. I'm especially excited to read the WW2 and the royal fic. This ends my review. I'm sorry for messing it up with three separate entries. Maybe I should just have emailed this to you directly. Haha

(Crap, sorry my review got posted incompletely. Stupid phone.)

As I was saying, i think this chapter pretty much wraps everything up by showing what is really the core of this story in 3-4 scenes which is just great writing. That no matter how perfect they are together as a family, they are caught in issues that are just way too complicated that a single happy night in Paris may not be able to solve. Marriage is hard work and unfortunately they both screwed up and it pains me to admit this but Ariadne, in spite of her shortcomings, is correct in saying that maybe love isnt enough. :( Adult problems sucks major balls, I swear.

Realistically speaking they have effed up way too much that their relationship (no matter how earth bending the love is, and anchored by two children-sorry Ender and Chloe) might not be fixed in a month or even a year. Trust issues abound not to mention NINE whole years is what they have to figure out. It's sad but for other couples divorce is really the way to go. But since I'm in love with these two and they're my 2nd best OTP, I am optimistic that the beauty of wishful thinking, your genius writing and fanfiction wizardry can get this two back together in no time. Hahaha.

I always love reading heartbroken/heartsick Arthur and their conversation about divorce is just icing on the cake for a story that has a lot of devastated Arthur moments. It's sad that when two people break up there's the possibility that one of them will really never move on. I better open a bar in Arthur's building cause i'm gonna get some cash from him.

LMAO i totally agree that whatever Eames and Ariadne has is a real yolo move. He's there, he's offering something different from Arthur and he's willing. Not the most mature move for a mother of 2 but we all have those moments.

On to the actual review, beware this is long and rambling. First off, GREAT CHAPTER. I love how this sort off wraps this up while summarizing the entire story i

Wow, just wow! This has got to be one of my faves chapters of this story. Started out as cute and sweet then went down hill. I've got mixed feelings about this, that I don't know where to start.
I really thought that we could get a happy ending the way that Arthur's birthday was playing out. They really did seem like the perfect family.
I understand what Ari was saying but she hasn't given Arthur a chance to try and change her mind about him. He's changed and wants to make it work with his family.
I think that what Ender said to Ari has opened her eyes to everything and I think she just needs time to think everything through. No parent wants to hear those words come out of their child's mouth.
But what he was saying was true. If they both love each other why cant they just get back together, and if love can't fix them what else can?
Poor Chloe, she had all her hopes raised so high, then they all came crashing down. I don't know how Ari could walk away and leave Chloe like that.
I wonder where Ari has gone, I hope she's not gone to see Eames...
I always say this, but I really don't know what to expect now. I guess that they're going to get a divorce, I don't think they'll be happy if they get back together for the kids. Even though they say they love each other, there's so much crap between them that they will never forget, they'll just end up butting heads. But I might be wrong, they might work things out between them and be that happy family.
Awesome chapter as always. I've just looked at your upcoming stories, I can't wait to read them :D xx