First of all I wanted to say I absolutely love this story premise. It's a really interesting take on the world of Remnant I've never seen before. As a critique, it is kinda hard keeping up with everybody sometimes, as I think you are using nicknames as well as full names, and it can get a little confusing remembering who is who. But it is very well written and I love the fact you are including both the old and new generation. I anxiously await the next chapter!

R.I.P. Pyrrha

So much names, I'm confused. I hope I get who is who in the next couple chapters xD
But it's very enjoyable to read, lovely characters, so far nice plot and the little Drama spices it about the right amount.
Please keep it up!

I'm going to need a chart to under stand who is who

Is... is Pyrrha dead?

I love this story. I kinda like where you're going with the kids, though there are somethings that I have to piece together because I didn't read the previous work, that you mentioned. But I'm slowly getting all of the relationships.

YEEEEEASSS! Ive been hoping this would continue and im extremely happy. Well done bro. Love the shift in pov between Jaune's generation and silberns. Cant wait for more XD

This is really nice. Please make more of this.I'd like to see how this goes :) XD