great job but it also looks like you've set up your own eventual sequel-Granger-I'm bettin when Deeks hugged him he picked his pocket!

FABS. lOVE THE TWIST. WHY DOES GRANGER WANT REVENGE AGAINST hETTY & dEEKS?
PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON

You leave it like this and you're not going for a sequel? Kidding right?
I thought it was well thought out and a nice addition to the episode. There was more insight to the characters thought processes. Thank you for writing it.

Bluedogsrock enjoyed this story immensely
looks forwatd to your next endeavour
will granger get his revenge and take out deeks?

awesome please update soon

Motsie nice job! I like how you gave previous characters more life and a bigger impact on the lives of our heroes.

nell just needed some time to get her head in the right space & acknowledge what happened & to accept it & move forward
hetty is not going to stay down long either
excellent chapter
thanks for the update

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This really is not good news for Hetty, the team or any other agents in the US. With Matthias on the run and has killed three people, whose side is he really on?

it is about getting into a certain head space & accepting that you have killed something or some one
and accepting this is part of the job
fantastic chapter
thanks for the update
merry christmas and have a wonderful new year

This was definitely worth the wait. I like how you refresh our minds about the situation and then give us the "fix" so to speak. I only hope that on the show she still has access to Nate. Nicely done Motsie.

fabulpous! please update soon

Another great chapter! Partly like the scenes we watched, but with that extra bite ;-)
Thanks

Love how you tied it all together. Was this what you were thinking about when the discussion of Happy Ever After happened? I understand your reasoning now. Nice chapter.

most excellent chapter
immensely enjoyed