This was a nice shot, even if you kill Joel. By now you most know that is a sequel on the way. I don't know if they're going to include the fireflies, at is seems on the trailer that is another group killing people. There rumors about Joel be dead or is going to die in this part, but I hope not. Joel and Ellie are they main character of this game and if they're going to make a sequel using one of them, they need to add the other. Yeah Ellie is going to be the main playable character in the sequel, but I think is going to be better to have both.

Anyway thanks for the story.

I really enjoyed your Aftermath series, and I just started part 2. It was sad, cruel yet fitting the way you axed Joel off. I agree with you that Joel’s arc is complete, and therefore, his place is uncertain in the sequel. I’ve written a similar fanfic of how Joel passes away, but it’s very different to what you’d expect. Love your story and I can’t wait to continue your other ones!

Well this honestly did not turn out how I thought it would. I didnt think you'd kill off Joel. It was very sad and the suspenseful build was intense. Everything was written perfectly though and it was all well executed. Best of luck in your future writing ventures!

I disagree with the review saying that Ellie should've been able to say goodbye to Joel. I think the way you did it was perfect and fits in perfectly with TLoU. It's a cruel unforgiving world. I can definitely envision Joel sacrificing himself for Ellie. It's a shame that his actions lead to the dead of more innocent people, but it's expected when you deny the world it's cure!
Your writing is excellent, you have a lot of potential. I've started your other fics and I'm green with envy at your skill! I hope to see more from you in the future, it's refreshing to know that there's someone out there who gives this amazing game the justice it deserves.

This story was shit, but loved aftermath though. Try harder.

Oh man!I can't believe it! Right it the feels.. :'(
Still really REALLY good! I can't wait to read more!

I just finished TLOU for the first time last week and have been ravenous for the storyline to continue. Your stories are amazing and have been a total joy to read, even if I did blaze through them all in two days (at the expense of sleep). Thanks for all your effort!

Really loved this! It was nice and refreshing. Thanks so much for this.

I'm so happy you posted another adventure! I have been longing for another one of your fan fictions! Especially The Last of us. This was just perfect and I could definitely see this being part of a sequel. I really hope they do make one. They made so much money with this game, It was just such a beautiful game. Your such an awesome writer. Thank you for this! -Chloe

Great work! Love the story direction. I will say that when she saw Joel dead I was heartbroken, and then when you said she awoke from a nightmare I thought it had all been a dream, only to be re-broken! While logically I agree that Joel's arch has (mostly) run its course, I truly wish there was a way to keep him involved in some shape or form. Maybe they take him hostage and Ellie attempts to get him back? I don't know. I think part of me just wants to experience more Joel and Ellie, whether or not it fits. Thanks again for putting this together - great work. Know that if you wouldn't have said you could not be convinced to continue it, I would absolutely be begging for more. :-)

Congratulations, Susan. Now you're the villain. I have no doubt that you have endless justifications for an act of mass-murder. All that matters is that you have the one infection that no miracle serum can cure. It's called being human and it's the thing that really destroyed the world.

Yeah! I am so happy to see you again. :) Poor Ellie..:( I really hope it wouldn't come to that in the sequel, if Joel and Ellie are in it that is. I wouldn't mind seeing more oneshots. I really love. a story about Ellie's life before she meet Joel and Riley. :D I know you are busy with your novel and life. It is just thought.

What a surprise to see you again, Thor. Wow! How are you able to turn a "fanart" drawing of Ellie into a story is just UNBELIEVABLE! I heard that the sequel is coming out in 2016 and but the story is undefined. I think I found one of the Easter eggs, is it "Hello, Ellie" is one of them? :) I hope you are doing more one shots like your versions of how Ellie got her scar and Riley's death.

the last few sentences seem familiar

Well what you know, looks who back? You can still write I see. More one shots please! :)