Reviews for Older, Younger, Both |
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Ayerim Herrera chapter 1 . 2/15 So sweet! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 Crazy adorable :) |
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 This story was great. Everyone was in character and I just couldn't stop reading. Good job. |
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 11/15/2014 A calm manner seems to surround the telling of this story and it matched the mood precisely. I adored the details of the weather, the flashbacks, and the intimate details Shikamaru shares about this friend Ino. You communicate a closeness that goes beyond just teammates and I enjoy the way you delve into your stories. Thanks so much for sharing your stories! |
The Clawed Butterfly chapter 1 . 10/4/2014 I still support this couple no matter what anyone else thinks |
Winnifred Artemis chapter 1 . 9/26/2014 Oooooo! Winny does like this one. Great story. I really liked that you included all the guests' activities during the party. Also, I think it only natural for Ino to have such thoughts - I've actually done a similar thing with her in a fanfic I wrote years ago - in Norwegian though. The scene where they talked was just so genuine them, I mean, I can LITERALLY hear the voices say the lines and move to the pattern you describe. And such a sweet kiss on the cheek in the end. - And OH! I love the 'you could have shared it would someone even more troublesome' line. It's totally awesome! If I'm to 'complain' about something it would have to be that I was really looking forward to their kiss. Oh well, I guess it wouldn't be natural in that situation. But still ;P ;) I guess that's all. Keep on writing awesome stories! - WA PS! Oh, and I'm just wondering... Would you be interesting in writing a joint piece? To do a oneshot or a 2-3 chapter story together with me? Oh, and I also have another suggestion if you're interested - it's kinda fresh, new and fun. Anyway, contact me with your answer, okay? - WA |
ember53608 chapter 1 . 9/23/2014 I don't ship ShikaIno anymore, but your fics of them are so so so good that I can't help but want for them to be together sometimes. The way you write them reminds me a lot of those couples that just have fun and grow old together, y'know? (Funny, given the content of this fic.) But their relationship's a really heartwarming one, and you picture it perfectly. I think this was a perfect piece for their birthday (which I forgot, too. . .)! |
mschweezy chapter 1 . 9/23/2014 I loved it! :) it was very sweet and shikaino-y. And don't feel bad because the whole Shikaino community kinda fell short this year, me being one too! I normally have tons of ideas to write for their birthdays, but this year I got nothing. Anyway I loved the story, and I love your writing style! Keep up the awesome work! :) |