I thought the ending was pretty good. The story was well written and funny as well. Can't wait to see what you do next

Im hoping this story un zero and maya love story is i Will like that and lot other readers Nice story

you have a good sense for how to use haiku's. A lot of writers don't bother. you make grammatical mistakes in some places, but that is easily forgiveable.

This is really good! Keep it up

It was my pleasure to read it from cover to cover my friend. Because it was quite enjoying to find something like this to be well done and written too.

I apologize for not reviewing but I am excited for the next chapter

nicely done

I loved reading chapter 5

It was well worth the read

I loved this chapter. And it's alright take your time with it

It's alright. I enjoyed reading chapter 2

I loved it and would love to read another chapter

Great use of Zer0's Haiku's, and though I would love to read about a colour change for Maya's tatoos, I think that atlas hired assassins make a better use of Zer0's precious time.
Keep going.