OK what laws are they and how come i did not receive an email update on a chapter that came out which it's this notification? Cause i did not know about this until now when i was looking for this story when i was in the mood to reread the chapter again.

anyways i am hoping to see the next chapter of blue star and the crimson nightmare soon. good luck with whatever it is that causing you trouble in Spain and hope to see you back on here with more chapters in the future.

later. :)

happy new year ! you completed chapter2 ? man please update,im waiting this for months!

Hope you update soon

Not bad, a few grammar errors here in there but it is still at a tolerable level. Anyway, glad to see some Naruto x MGQ (just finished the entire storyline a few days back) story, the Tsukihime aspect is an added bonus. I also like how you portrayed his personality here, its rather nice. Looking forward to see more of this.
If I might make one small request, please spare Promestein (if she ends up in the harem even better). Sure she did quite a few bad things, but in the game I just could not bring myself to dislike her, considering what happened to her.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Alice, Tamamo, Valkyrie, Ilias, Sylph, Alma Elma, Granberia, Micaela, Harpy Queen, Salamander, and Carmilla.
Love this story looking forward to the next chapter.

Brilliant I agree on all except Ilias

This was a good chapter and I liked Naruto's interaction with Luka, so will Naruto meet Luka a couple more times or something of that nature? If I could complain about anything in the chapter it would be where you didn't directly say who was speaking, i.e. "the redhead". It would help if you mentioned that Naruto was the only redhead so that others wouldn't confuse it for another character or something. Other than that, good job.
P.S. : good job on the lemon. This is turning out to be a good fanfic so far

so is the candidates mean they are already chosen or not? if so then I definitely say add tamamo because for one she is a kyuubi and when naruto goes back to his world LAWL and alice of coarse. a plant girl of some type, alma elma oh and a gargoyle girl should look them up their sexy and turning into stone woot. will you do an arc of naruto's home world? would be interesting to see.

game is Monmosu quest or monster girl quest.

anyone mind telling me the name of the game or source of the monter girl stuff, kinda want to know the name

Could you add a centurion(horse) girl?

best fic ever :D

nice start to the story, I liked that Naruto didn't really focus on using his magic, because I am guessing if he did he would overpower most people in that world. one thing I hope you get around to telling in the story is how Naruto used the 5th true magic (Time Travel/control) to travel to another world, or has Naruto learn a little of the 2nd true magic (Operation of Parallel Worlds). the only way right now I can picture this happening is if the 5th true magic can manipulate time/space and he has travelled to a different planet by warping space and not to a different dimension. plz update asap

nice