Reviews for Demon's Bride |
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Mendokuzai21 chapter 4 . 1/4 yuckss |
TheWateringWizard chapter 13 . 7/5/2018 You forgot to give Kuro a moustache to twirl ! Something that has also been bothering me since the start, you often repeat yourself. It’s not like you write down the same thing twice but you’ll express an idea and a little later, you’ll say the same thing again ! |
TheWateringWizard chapter 11 . 7/5/2018 Haha, I’m sorry but that ending was completely dumb. It seems like Hinata has completely forgotten how she feels about Naruto. Why would she even accept the date with Kuro ?! Doesn’t it seems odd ? And her saying she thinks he love her ?! That was the cherry on top of the whole stupid thing... Why did you have to add this kind of stupid, unecessary drama ? |
TheWateringWizard chapter 7 . 7/5/2018 Yeah Naruto kick some ass ! |
TheWateringWizard chapter 6 . 7/5/2018 So cute that ending ! |
TheWateringWizard chapter 4 . 7/5/2018 I can’t wait for Naruto to reach the « I’m not a fucking piece of shit » part |
TheWateringWizard chapter 2 . 7/5/2018 I’m not a fan at all of Naruto’s haircut |
TheWateringWizard chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 Nice start ! |
gindensmi chapter 52 . 6/29/2018 This was good well worth the wait!Looking forward to reading more! |
RAy chapter 4 . 2/25/2018 RWBY |
theeyethatwatchesoverall chapter 1 . 10/8/2017 Amazing... That's all I can say |
NarHina chapter 52 . 9/17/2017 Loved the story it was great, I like how you added Boruto and Himawari into the story at the end. A bit confused at the fact that Kazumi is eighty yet looks ten, but I guess that is because demons age much longer. Naruto and Hinata Forever:) |
Guest chapter 52 . 9/16/2017 Great work on the story. Congrats! |
Guest chapter 51 . 9/16/2017 Great work on the chapter. Keep it up! |
Guest chapter 50 . 9/7/2017 Great work here! |