Agh this is such an amazing ff-a really well written story and one of the best I’ve come across on this site. I rly like the relationship between Legolas and Eruanne- it's like cat and mouse and I like that there is spunk and a bit of cruelty in their dynamic. That makes it so much more interesting to read than if they get along well which is so cheesy.I aslo adored his jealousy f the archives dude-I know it's cliche but I love the classic jealousy/dominance/possessive/protective gig lmao. I know its been a really long time since you’ve updated and probably won’t see this but if you do, please update-you have such talent and it would be a shame not to continue. Pplz plz update xxx

OMFG this is sooo epic
I hope they can save Eruanne's sister
and that they will kiss soon
that is... if you haven't abandonned the story... since you haven't updated since 2015...
I hope you'll update soon
this is too awesome to go to waste

Stayed up till 2 am to read this; totally worth it please update soon

Loving this fanfic so much! Please, please update! :)

Post again bae

Your mixture of humour and seriousness throughout each chapter makes for an easy read. From what I can tell all your canonical characters- from what little we see of them- are in character; however, I believe you may have misrepresented the Elven race but this is most likely a result of our different interpretations of Tolkien's writings. Additionally, your OC character (which does not come across as a Mary-Sue) and original storyline fits into the Middle-Earth world, adding to the complexity and beauty rather than ruining it. Nevertheless, I cannot see a happy ending for the pairing as Legolas is destined for the Undying Lands whilst your OC is destined to fade. However, tragic romance is common place in Tolkien's world so this is not a complaint. Keep up the good work and don't let bad reviews get you down.

I love the story so far and can't wait to see Legolas and Eruanne finally get together. Just one thing, is Elohtolpa the wife or the daughter? Because in the earlier chapters, I think she was referred to as the daughter.

Ooop. He just figured out he's in love. Awwwww :D

Great chapter!

This is a wonderful story so far! Hope to see more soon!

So the sister is still alive. Does that mean Legolas has a brother or sister he doesn't know about or did she lose it? Or am I way off base of what I thought several chapters ago when she was puking? At any rate, awesome chapter. I have to admit, it was funny to watch them both eat crow a little bit there.

A short but sweet chapter, it's enough to get me by, thank you.

gHASP!111
Her mum!

It's me again, KrayzeeAussie, to lazy to sign in...again.

Can I just say, be still my aching heart, that was a fabulous sentence to end the chapter on. Not sure if it was the baby doing somersaults or my heart flipping as I read it, but it moved something! High five girl!

ooo Immy Legolas helped her sister escape!? That changes everything... he is honourable after all... I am so thrilled that Legolas and Eruanne finally understand each other and he is a different ellon than I thought.

This is so romantic..he will honour his promise but she really now has her heart free to love him.