ah, there it is. I was wondering when that conversation was going to happen. nice chapter, looking forward to seeing them hang up on Naruto

that's a bit farfetched. none of them were seal masters, I might be able to believe canceling out the teleporting but the Bijuu? I don't think so.

It's a nice story and started out amazing but I think in you trying to make a hard fight for naruto you've beefed up the others a bit too much.

still, aside from that, nice chapter.

not to be that guy, but why would Gaara ask of Shego was her real name? he wouldn't know anything about this new world so he would probably assume that was just a normal name, there would be mo reasons for him to ask... unless I missed something income of the letters, which is entirely possible.

Looking forward to the rewrite of this story

Great story so far

I hope Naruto and end up being a couple at the end of the story

Next chapter you all get to see Shego and Kim save Naruto by removing the Hostages and letting Naruto go all out against Sakura, Hinata and Ino. One word of warning, my Ino, Sakura and Hinata are NOT cannon versions.

I skipped ahead 5 chapters to see about him meeting the others so I didnt see this but it was still forced with them showing up with fresh unabated hatred for him including Hinata who was pointed out to be kind beforehand. Lacking context of the past they're just suddenly showing uo to kill him so quickly and just came off too forced.

It's strange even Inoichi the mind guy is even against Naruto over Sasuke who should know Sasuke was off in the head.

Yeah this bit was painfully forced especially with Hinata who watched him growing up and knows better than to be calling him a demon. Like with the Pain incident and all.

This was just unpleasant and needless. Out of all the stories I've read so far belonging to this author this is the second one that's taken an annoying and unpleasant turn. The first on this account. The other account having a screwed up ntr situation that didnt even remotely try to make sense with Hinata and Boruto and was beyond forced.

Thankfully the author admitted he fudged up with that story though he did keep at it for way too long. However idk what's going on with him or the stories on that account including the new non ntr version of that one.

Really hope those get updated and not left behind for more new stories. I swear aside from one shots I really wonder if there are even 2 dozen completed stories on this site of any kind. Even close to completed before being dropped for that matter.

I dont her those clans turning against him over Sasuke. I really don't.

It's a shame that Hinata wasnt with him too.

I'd prefer if she, Tsunade, Shizune, Hinata and eventually the Ichirakus came over while Kakashi who I think was supposed to end up the 6th Hokage took over.

Him with Kim, Shego and Hinata would be my preferred end result.

I assume by the intro hes with both but this chapter saying either one or the other would've been a let down.

1) Eventually Sakura got around to telling others what happened with Sasuke and eventually they started to turn on him. He had no idea why they were doing it.

There were some that didn't believe her but over time she got them to turn on him. She even got the Hyuga's to blame him for Neji's death. Hinata would glare at him with less intensity than the others but he chalked that up to her not being the glaring type.

This is really hard to imagine especially with her obsession for Sasuke being well known and with everything Saduke did why they would turn on him over ending such a threat. Hinata as well.

For of all people only Konohamaru to support him? It's like a weak attempt to justify him wanting to go and no one being with him.

Better off just not being mentioned cause it's more annoying and unbelievable than anything else.

2) Since I dont think they're really sealed i think it would be cool if the biju could leave his body and take on solid henge's for human forms.

Damn. Even Tsunade, Shizune, Hinata and the Ichirakus turned on him? I knew by the description but would've liked if he had brought at least 1 person with him.

Especially with this:

Kurama chuckled as he was used to it unlike his siblings. "I chalk it up to his childhood, he never was one to get affection but you'd think after that Hinata girl he'd get a bit more aware" he said making the others sweat drop.

wish he brought Hinata away with him. It's a waste. Tsunade and Shizune whi should care for him couldve left the village with Kakashi since Tsunade didnt want to be there in the first place

Yes I recall the whole only he could survive it which wasnt necessary to be a thing and couldve been a lie just so the guy wouldnt try again.

Hell he couldve had some fuinjutsu seal for living beings and stored them just to be safe to get around that.

After all his clothing survived due to what I'm guessing would be his cloak. As did his seals pocket dimensions despite going through this deadly dimensional portal.

Theres also obviously reverse summoning as a shortcut back to and from the elemental nations as he pointed out he can still summon the toads.

Anyway I did enjoy the chapter quite a bit. I look forward to seeing how this goes.

please do the rewrite soon

I wish the rinnegan could revive people

are these rewrites still in the works because it has almost been two years