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I love this story keep up great work I like way different ending of scene from season 4 :) hope there a more chapter of this story :-)

'Hey there I may or may not have turned your daughter into an alien.' Run, Doctor. Just...run.

You really have to write a second chapter! IT NEEDS TO HAPPEN.

Oh, yes! The way it should have been. We really do need to see when the Doctor tries to explain to Wilf and Sylvia. I think we might find out where Donna gets her slapping ability from. Wilf will be delighted she's alive, and even more delighted Donna will be able to travel with the Doctor for a very long time. They both were better with the other.

Yay for the Doctor no longer being the last of his kind!

Live this! She just keeps going on about Felspoon and its amazing! Are you going to continue this? I would love to see her react with 11.

Oh, I'm sure Donna's mom will be just thrilled with the Doctor about her daughter being a Time Lord, now (LOL!) Love the story! :D

Oh, I love this. Donna looking so forward to Felspoon - the "Still halfway to Felspoon" line made me laugh. I like the beginning with the way you write from the Doctor's thoughts as he worries about Donna, nice touch, and nicely written piece, it's perfectly short and sweet :)

I really, really, REALLY love this! Thank you so much for writing the ending that should have been!
I hope to see more of these, and I will definitely read more of your work, thank you again!
Sincerely,
-Dr. B. Shadow.

EPIC AWESOME TERIFFIC