Reviews for A Lingering Touch
BritishShinshi chapter 18 . 1/27/2018
Just like the rest of your stories, this was a great read! I'm glad this one is finished and completed with an ending. However, I do wish Hiroki's parents will meet Nowaki. I hope you can make a short one-shot of that haha. I love your stories!
M. Maroth Araya chapter 7 . 1/14/2018
Uwaah, how frightening! Dumb Hiroki, he should have listened to Nowaki, but well, that's how he is. Now I am just wondering how you will develop their story.
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 18 . 6/7/2016
This is love. This is one of the sweetest love stories ever written. Loved the part where Nowaki bumped into walls and doors. But you cheated, we deserve more than kisses. Come on.. few kisses are not enough. You always trick out of serious lemons. And loved the last part, where Nowaki wishes for happy ending for the characters. It was so Kawaii...

Thank You for penning this story. I love you.
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 17 . 6/7/2016
Awwwwwwwwww... that hug. This was so sweet. Ooo Nowaki walking around with that huge body and catching Hiroki was adorable. Thank you for giving us a happy ending. Thank you so much.
ArticulateClay chapter 17 . 5/31/2016
Aww lovely! I was online and I suddenly get mail and see that it is an alert from you! xD
Such a cute chappy. Hiroki sobbing on Nowaki's chest is exactly how I imagined their re-union!

And go, Hiroki! No accepting money from our dear Nowaki-kun! Go kick him into the bedroom to rest just like in the manga! x)

It's all wrapping up so nicely. Cannot believe we'd be saying goodbye to this fic in a while. x(
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 16 . 5/16/2016
Two typos~
This *is* coming from the guy who loved visiting...
I know the owner of the More*l*

Nowwwww... I beg you. Pleaseeee give me the next chapter. Please. This was so bad when Hiroki was staring at white doc page! He thought Nowaki was gone. And that stupid student! Grades are not everything.

Awww Nowaki, you are human. I loved the part where he is trying to walk. I mean it was so sweet and cute. For centuries he was just an angel in floating world. But now... here he is.

Is Hiroki rushing towards him now? Come on give me next chapter. Please...
ArticulateClay chapter 16 . 5/16/2016
I've been following all of your Egoist stories. You write really really well and I'm so glad you update in your own time and haven't abandoned them! xD
A very lovely chapter and the following chapters will surely be wonderful! Especially the next chap when Hiroki will see Nowaki in his human form. Oh the emotions! xD
All in all, keep writing! You are amazing at it! xD
fanatla chapter 15 . 4/24/2016
Ahhhhhhhh!... good cliffhanger, I want to know what happens when Nowaki gets to live again.
:)
Guest chapter 15 . 4/22/2016
OMG, so many updates. I'm sure they'll be awesome. I have a lot to catch up with. Thanks for writing.
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 15 . 4/22/2016
The backflash, oh Poor Nowaki, what a terrible life, what a great sacrifice and such a long lonely life. I felt so bad when Ghost NOWAKI talks with his father and doesn't recognize him. How lonely he must have been for centuries. That meeting with Hiroki was so purgatory for his lonely self. I really love the bonds formed in childhood in stories. I could feel the relief and pain NOWAKI felt when Hiroki saw him in his childhood. Wonderful replay of the junjou mini chapter. So far the saddest chapter here. And I loved how he chose to go back to Hiroki in end. But how will they be together, till death do us apart?
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 14 . 4/22/2016
Damn it! Hiroki you can't increase NOWAKI's tensions. God it hurts! It hurts so bad! You don't plan to end the story in tragedy I hope. That part was so, so sad when the pendant disappeared! Only you can make me weep.
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 13 . 4/22/2016
Woooooooooooow! That was like the longest wait for first kiss! I loved it! For once I see Hiroki taking initiative. That was wow.. who would have thought relationship was possible between ghost and human! Well if vampire and humans can, ghost can too..
asdfghjklove chapter 15 . 4/21/2016
Instead of going to sleep like I should have, I decided to binge read this story, after seeing the three chapter update appear in my inbox, after not being on FF for a number of years. I am so glad did.

After first reading up to around chapter 4/5, having 15 chapters was a pure joy. I love anything egoist related, and I have never read anything along these lines of this before, and it's GREAT!

I don't know how you keep coming up with all these great story ideas, but please keep it up! They are so fun to read, so warm and touching, I find myself turning to mush when reading all the sweet fleeting moments between the egoist boys.

I can't wait to see how you conclude this story, I eagerly wait for your update. Take our Nowaki to his Hiro-san right away so they can love eachother! :) I'm so looking forward to this reunion!
Guest chapter 12 . 4/8/2016
Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter. Faithful reader here, horrible reviewer. Will be waiting for the next update. You rock!
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 12 . 3/25/2016
God!
Oh
my
GOD!

That attempt at kiss was so funny and sad! Aww NOWAKI blushing about Hiroki! This was such a emotional chapter. All those tiny gestures, of Reiki and Hiroki embracing, Misaki actually reading a book and commenting, Akihiko trying help his friend. Just two more chapters! And thus story will end! I will miss it all and who was the female guardian? She feels of strength and power... great chapter you have here.
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