“Seriously? Who the hell wants to read about us?” lmao, you have no idea, Sasuke...

Naruto trying to make amends with everyone.

I'm confused is this the last chapter or is it a come back..

Yay Sasu has finally moved in with Naru! I'm so happy that Naru and Sasu are living toegther! Sasu and Naru work so well together in a relationship and Naru doesn't mind living with Sasuke and actually finds it comfortable...awe that part when Naru saved the beautiful pregnant Taichi was so sweet Naru is so sweet 3..i think it's such a cute idea to write a fanfic about them Naru is so creative..this has been a beautiful fanfic though I wish it was Omegaverse so Naru could get preggers with Sasu's baby but I get that's going too far though I seriously enjoyed this thank you for writing this story!

(Im an introvert like Naru XD) It's so adorable that Naru was still technically a virgin since Choji's dick was so small and Choji had never made Naru cum..When Sasu said 'a real man never pleased you' I was 'aweing' so much because Sas will be that man to pleasure Naru for the rest of his life..3...Naru was still so cute and innocent..mentally and physically Naru was still a virgin 3..and instead of just a quick fuck Sasu was gentle..Sasu made love to Naru..3...Sasu made Naru feel good and had the blond screaming and moaning for him...their first kiss was sweet and slow and felt so right..their bodies mold together perfectly..Naru was expecting Sasukl to be awkward and forceful but it all flowed well and felt so right..it was so sexy how Naru submitted to Sasu's dominance so easily so willingly..i love the way Sasu ravished Naru like an alpha with his omega in heat/rut and the way Naru moaned and screamed in pleasure an innocent sensitive virgin..Sasu was the one to truly take Narutos virginity and first kiss...i was so happy when Naru explained that it didn't hurt to have Sasu inside him..I was a bit upset that Sasu didn't make Naru orgasm but at least he made Naru feel comfortable and really fucking good but I don't think Naru's prostate had ever been hit at least not yet...at least Sasu came and really fucking hard...but I hope that soon Naru's prostate will be abused to the core so Naru can orgasm..im so happy that Naru wasn't sore after sex and I also love how Sasu is so tall and built while Naru is shorter then him and plump/curvy! Naru has great stamina..that part where he was pleasuring himself with the vibrator and Sasu walked in on him orgasming was sexy as fuck..i Can't believe Naru has been using a vibrator since he was twelve..so young..so innocent..The Chinese food incident was so cute they are such an adorable couple they remind me of Marshall and Lily from How I met your mother..Awee Naru admits that he's falling in love with Sasu..3...I was so satisfied when Sasu finally made Naru cum (with a little help of his prostate) at the end..

After being dumped Naru was so utterly broken that he practically gave up on love and relationships...thinking he should just go and fuck for fun...I'm glad Sasuke changed his mind...(I'm currently wearing baggy grey sweats with a baggy black death note shirt XD) When Sasuke and Naru began to get both emotionally and physically intimate..i was swooning they clearly belong together 3..When Sasuke slapped Naru's ass then Naru straddled Sasuke and said 'i think I want to kiss you now Sasuke..' and 'i think I want to fuck you..' I was fanboying so hard..i hope they finally fuck and get together...

Why the fuck would Choji ask what Naru would do if he hit him?! Choji didn't have to be so harsh with the children...i fucking hate Choji he's such a hog that he won't even let Naru have room in the bed...i wish Naru would just break up with him and not give him another chance...Naru should just go out with Sasuke...Choji really pisses me off taking all of Naru's firsts and then throwing him away like nothing he hadn't even treated the blond right...i guess Naru stayed with Choji because he was afraid of being alone or started to date Choji because Naru himself has self-esteem issues so he believes himself to be ugly and fat (but he isn't) he's sweet, curvy, and beautiful...Naru was going through so much his mama OD'd and he lost his job and would soon lose his house...and even though he was in a relationship Choji wasn't there for him...but I'm so happy that Sasuke was there for him making him laugh and smile through it all...3...i love Sasuke so much he makes Naruto so happy and practically skip in joy..When Sasuke came over and him and Naru were hanging out it was so cute and comfortable...IM JUST SO PISSED CHOJI BROKE UP WITH NARU AND HURT THE BLONDS FEELINGS! I'm glad they broke up but pisses that Choji was the one to end it!

Eww Kyuu is married to Sakura..he deserves better like maybe Menma or Itachi heck even Konan is better...i really don't ship ChojiNaru..its just nasty...Choji is so inconsiderate, fat (Like he's super fat it's gross) and dirty while Naru is beautiful pleasantly plump (curvy with cute nipples and nice plump ass) and very loving...they don't belong together I hope they break up somehow because that Shower and sex was a disaster that had me gagging Choji is disgusting...its so sad that Naru has never enjoyed sex (love making) he was always in pain...poor Naru had never even orgasmed before...it frustrates me how Choji calls other girls sexy, perfect, or hot comparing them to Naru which makes Naru feel self-conscious, jealous, and like a cheap whore...and then Choji said that he knew Naru would have sex for money like wtf! And then Choji watched porn in front of Naru..Poor Naru gave all his special firsts (first kiss, virginity, ect.) To Choji and he regrets it all...I'm glad he's still talking with Sasuke...him and Sasuke seriously need to get together...Sasuke is right about everything I'm so glad Sasuke and Naru got to hang out in real life they obviously have a mutual attraction and like eachother alot..Sasuke is so handsome and tall and sweet he even paid for a meal for Naru...Sasu and Naru belong together...they are so goofy, playful, and comfortable with eachother 3..Sasuke can make Naru laugh and smile so easily..CHOOSE SASUKE!

Oh no Naruto wasted his first kiss on Choji! I was really hoping for Naru to have his first kiss with Sasuke..i love how curvy Naru is with a nice round and plump ass XD Orochimaru was checking his ass out! Sasuke obviously likes Naru he even wants to take pictures of Naru~ I really think Naru should go out on a date with Sasuke or at least see what he looks like! I hate that Naru is dating Choji...i'm so upset Naru lost his virginity to Choji it's a waste I was hoping he would lose it to Sasuke...Choji dosen't even really treat Naru right he had not gained the permission to take Naru's innocence...i came here for SasuNaru...Sasuke really likes Naru...i hope Naru gives Sasuke a chance! i think Naruto shouldn't have rushed into a relationship with Choji...It really saddened me when Naru got Choji a very nice expensive gift and Choji was ungrateful and didn't even get Naru a gift..then he had the fucking audacity to take Naru's precious virginity! CHOJI IS SUCH AN INSENSITIVE PIECE OF SHIT HE DIDN'T DESERVE NARU! I'M SO PISSED! i feel really bad for Naru his goal was to fall in love and be with one man for the rest of his life but seeing how Naru is always hurt by Choji and dosen't even enjoy the sex he has to fake moan and Choji is so selfish only caring about how he felt and not Naru (Naru's first time must have been horrible..) Choji dosen't DESERVE Naru...i really hope Naru breaks up with Choji...Naru deserves so much more...

I'm so happy for Naru he finally got his own place! Yay Kyuubi is Narutos brother! Naru is adorable he hadn't even had his first kiss yet 3...Yay finally my baby Sasuke is introduced! Choji seems nice but Sasuke is the one for Naru..

Naruto seriously reminds me of myself...a complete virgin who's struggling with the exact same religious issues (just like he described) I'm lonely and work taking care of disabled children (ages 2 to 13) cleaning their shit and throw up...I have terrible self-esteem issues and social anxiety..i don't even have friends irl I only message my friends who I call 'babes' on the phone..i watch 'how i met your mother' on repeat and never tire of it..I'm also super shy and depressed asf...I've cut and have attempted suicide multiple times but never provail and I'm also overweight and mostly wear sweat pants with t-shirts...i mostly hang out with cats..im not attractive and I've never been on a date in my life...my dad is in prison for life so I've never really known him and my mom and I are distant and have a weird sad and awkward relationship..so I can relate to Naruto more then ever...i wonder who's Naru's brother i hope it's Kyuubi because I love Kyuu XD..So Naruto's parents are Tsunade and Kakashi? Are they his real parents or adoptive parents? Yum Yum Gaara (Awee Gaara thinks Naru is cute and has a nice curvy body 3 but he's a heroin attic and was trying to move in with Naru so he's marked off the list..) and Shikamaru (XD Shika is strong and tall but kept hugging Naru and trying to grope the blond so he's off the list!) want to get to know Naru..they are both attractive and I love them both! I don't know about Lee he sounds sketchy (I was right he is weird...thank God he's off the list!) and I think Choji and Naru will get along better they have more in common..considering all the feedback he got in Craig's list I have a feeling Naruto isn't ugly and is actually very attractive...that scene where Naru is crying in the shower had me in tears..Wow Suigeysu can sure make Naruto feel good...i wonder who Suigetsu's traveling friend is maybe Sasuke?

This fic has a strange charm in it. Hm, realistic too. But I'm banging my head when he refused to leave Choji. But I guess Naruto is too loyal. Its charming and endearing and cute.

Omg this fic is so good , it so realistic in a weird sense bc I relate to Naruto so much so I'm not sure if we share some similarities or not lol. Anyway I'm def a late bloomer when it comes to relationships . Cho was literally killing me he was so lame and I guess we all been in that kind of relationship , I wanted to strangle him bc he made Naruto feel so uncomfortable emotionally and sexually. (Like when he said he doesn't believe in condoms ! That was so dangerous and an ass move !) I'm glad Naruto is free from him although I wished Naruto would have broke it off first ... then sasuke and Naruto relationship although it is not perfect I can appreciate . Communication is key in relationships so when ever something happens like bills need to be paid or what not you gotta say that shit lol... anyway it was a nice read bc I related to Naruto's personality

Wow , it was a little wierd reading this bc basically I feel like you wrote about me and my lame ass life lol , like the personality and mannerism were so close to Naruto or yours( bc I'm not sure if you actually wrote about your life in this fic lol) even the bf situation .. I'm a late bloomer just like in this fic lol... anyway it was a very good story and I was so glad when Naruto and sasuke got together bc Naruto was def not being appreciated in his last relation ship .. great story !

Very interesting read, thank you for writing this and sharing it with us all.

You've got an original style of writing, which really suited the nature of your story, making it a breath of fresh air. The story had a very realistic feel to it and the way you describe actions and scenarios help to convey the opinion and feeling of the character involved (usually Naruto).

Only criticism I have is the accidental use of text speech when characters were speaking on the phone, such as writing 'you' as 'u', etc.