I am truly, truly sad that this story has been on hiatus so long, and even more sad that I am only finding it now. I very much enjoyed reading every piece of it, I loved the themes behind the story, and I very much admired the method behind the crossover. Even with the WIP chapters, the quality of writing was a VERY welcome change to so many stories I have read, and the pacing and scale of the story easily put it in the top echelon of any fanfiction I have seen. Extemely good work that I very much enjoyed reading, and I hope you receive this comment!

Wish there was more,pls update.

I could serve as a beta-reader if that would be of interest to you?

I have quite enjoyed the story so far.
Yes, scatterings of errors are present by can easily be overlooked due to the content overall. A other good chapter, keep up the good work.
Must now rest my tired eyes from all this binge reading.

Re: The strength and interest of this story.

Its tricky to say.

I find it interesting overall.
More so perhaps with the Missionary Herself. Interest with all the OCs except for fat William.

I hope that the imperium from the mass effect universe doesn't side with or become controlled by Cerberus. Rather that it Be the other way around. Seeing as he became indoctrinated anyway, eventually by reapers, he should be swayed to the truth.

you know, after months of skipping this, im finally gonna read it, im curious.

Ded story I believe. F to pay respects

Hang on. Hold the fucking phone. This was the *un-beta’d* chapter? It was the most legible one yet. The grammar so far has been utterly incomprehensible. The only reason I didn’t give up ages ago was cause I couldn’t find any similar fics that caught my interest.

I am... intrigued. I’m a bit annoyed at the timeline, I admit- it’d have been fate more interesting, imo, if the Missionaries had arrived a century or two prior to canon- early enough to start influencing human culture significantly and rapidly, not early enough to turn them into full fledged Imperials.

Great story hope to see more, how many followers do the impieral cult have in mass effect

such a shame this fic is dead. had a lot of potential. wouldhave liked to see more imperials show up. maybe intime for the reapers. oh well

Really sad that this fic is dead, it's the best 40K/ME crossover on this site

I liked the chapter!

I'm really sad that you are no longer working on this gem of a story. I love how it progressed and has continued to build up,

My only fear is that I will have to only imagine what's coming next...

This is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next

Very captivating story, hope that you continue to update it