Awesome story so far! Can't wait to see more! :)

*gasp* HAILP- eh, *coughcough*, FROST! I was waiting for her to show up again. I was watching through each chapter.

Sorry for not being around for a while. I've been busy.
I forgot about Hailpaw/Frost. Oops.

So Frost's group is growing... as expected, and Breeze'paw' joined her, as could be guessed. I wonder who else will be joining them! Since it kind of seems like this'll be a half on half kind of fighting. Oh! I just can't wait to see how you're going to do this!

Wow! This is a great fanfic! I kinda sympathize with Breezepaw. To me it seems like Hazelpaw doesn't realize that if she kills herself it will hurt other people. And it gets really aggravating when someone thinks that. I hope there's a chapter with Hailpaw/Frost soon, since her and Breezepaw are my favourite charecters.

Oh! how exciting, I know how fun it is to write cats spying on others _ I can't wait to see how this all works out, which cats will be good, and which will be bad ;)

All the characters are just so interesting! I'm very impressed that you can keep each personality unique, especially when there are so many main characters. Great chapter by the way, it was a little short, but kind of important as a go between chapter. Kind of got the plot rolling again it seems. Keep writing!

Hazelpaw does make an interesting character.
Breezepaw is too protective of Hazelpaw, if you ask me.

It's kinda sad for Hazelpaw. I mean, in a sense, she's given up on life.

I love this chapter! I wondered if Poppypaw had something more.

Yay! That was awesome! When I was reading the tenth or so chapter, I thought I wouldn't be able to understand what their powers were, but since you described it and stuff, and of course their names, (like Breezepaq for really fast, Fadepaw for fading,LOL) I think I can understand their powers. Great story, only some peoples writing actually had correct punctuation and less typos. I like Hailpaw's point of view, although I wish the other apprentices were their to rule with her. Also, it is still kinda confusing who the characters are. I mean that by shen you are trying to remember all of them in your mind. Overall good story and plot, although I wish something would happen soon instead of LIFE out of the clans.

Is frost and the others ever going to get back together

I know the feeling of not getting many reviews... It just makes you wonder what you did wrong. And great chapter! I liked the bit about Poppypaw, her power is intriguing, being able to see emotions... maybe if it grows stronger she'll be able to see thoughts? Kinda like Jayfeather ;)

That was great! loved the part with Hailpaw! I mean, Frost. How did it take me so long to find that you had updated? I have no idea, sorry!

Yeah Hailpaw!