| Reviews for Primordial or Guardian |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 4/7/2018 dam percy you go! never have I ever seen a boy just go all out like that |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/1/2017 Luv it |
 RealArtemisOlympus chapter 2 . 11/22/2016 this is a great story, it gave me feeling so strong I almost cried |
| ZoeandArtyawesomelover chapter 11 . 1/15/2016 it sucks that you were kicked out of school. teachers nowadays just don't know what they do. believe me I have been in the gutter myself too. they just don't see the whole panorama. there is nothing to forgive, this is your hobby not your duty. you do it because you like it not because you have to. sorry if my others reviews sounded harsh but somethings were just simply wrong, I just wanted to point out some obvious mistakes. hope all is cool bro. |
| ZoeandArtyawesomelover chapter 9 . 1/15/2016 doesn't the Chaos blessing give him power over almost everything? i mean he is the creator and all therefore the other blessings just sum up to his powers right? also, Artemis is a mortal...how can she bless him? |
| ZoeandArtyawesomelover chapter 7 . 1/15/2016 blue fire cool! |
| ZoeandArtyawesomelover chapter 6 . 1/15/2016 11 days ago they both were angry at each other and Percy was going to be "mean" to them, today they are kissing and making out! should I mention 10 of those days he was unconscious? I know that from hate to love there is only one step but come on! work it up a bit could you? sorry if it sounds like a flame but its annoying that in the last chapter they were at each others throat. I am just trying to help with the story |
| ZoeandArtyawesomelover chapter 5 . 1/15/2016 yeah she is happy he is immortal but she isn't. oh the irony! |
| frytrix chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 Percy, bipolar much. ... |
| The Fiction Fan chapter 10 . 7/26/2015 I thought you would update it |
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/24/2015 Awesome story, cant wait for the next chapter, totally get it about school |
| kurumakit chapter 10 . 4/17/2015 Cool love and who the man update soon and can you dedicate a chapter to me if you have it done by April 20 because its my birthday on that date |
| JustLucky05 chapter 10 . 4/13/2015 nice, very nice! Keep up the great work! |
| Gold Testament chapter 10 . 4/10/2015 HA! The Olympians have no choice but to respect Percy more than themselves now since thanks to his idea of teaming up with the Titans they have a lead on returning Artemis to normal. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/12/2015 This is just fucking stupid . Sending under the fucking control of artemis. Really man you could do better. The way his power portrayed is that he has no traininning. And really Aretemis has no control over nobody but her hunters why do make it seem she has control over him hopefully u would see my reaction and try better with artemis and percy story |
