And this fits Moody perfectly...

This was a really good laugh! Thank you for this piece. There seems to be very few fics on about Tonk's time as a trainee, which is such a shame since must have been a good adventure with moody as her mentor, she becoming his favourite mentee.

This is probably my favourite Moody fic ever! It was a great protrayal of all the characters. You should write more chapters. Maybe Tonks joining the order.

Fantastic.

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This would have been great if you hadn't gone with Magical Cores and Maxima.

Poor Tonks! I really enjoyed this story and how the lessons she suffered came thru to her advantage. She's such a badass by the end, but I'm sure by Mad Eye's reckoning she still has a long ways to go. Bones and Scrimgeour just accepting the situation and justifying it as the logical consequences of Moody's mentoring made me smile and was a good way to end the story. Thanks for writing and sharing!

lmfao to good

Paranoia or was it real..? I love how Moody trained Tonks, it just seems so fitting for his character. I especially loved the Memory (charm) bits. :)

Wow, I like this Moody. A great fic

Hilarious, the funniest thing is that Tonks's understandable paranoia had run amok, but somehow went in the right direction. :-)

Now I wonder if it really was an assassination attempt or if Tonks is being paranoid after training with Moody.

love it

Wow, I'm surprised Tonks remained as cheerful as she did when she met Harry, as well as getting beat in a duel, at the end of the series, hater to think what her opponent had gone through to have taken her out.

Bwhahaahah! Oh Tonks, you just passed with flying colours, a test that wasn't a test. Hired/Approved/Whatever!