Excellent story, and told very well!

I hope you one day continue this it's such a great time travel story.

This was amazing! Thank you for sharing this with us.

By far my fav Tomione! I loved how you started post Hogwarts, and this has got to be the sweetest Tomione ever. I think it's the only one I've read so far that brings them all through their beginnings until they get grey hair!ugh my heart. Yes, even though it WAS TOM'S FAULT she went through the whole time travel ordeal and him being an arse and all. But STILL. Thoroughly enjoyed this. So (save for Tom's Tomness) wholesome too. Thank you for this gem you're amazing!

Loved this! Thank you so much for writing.

i adore it!

This story is very well written and I love the smooth evolution of their relationship, I really like how you made Tom Jedusor.

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I really, truly loved this and I’m glad there are Tomione gems like this floating around. Thank you for sharing!

Loved it

Wow, great story. The writing is extremely good except you’ve got some noticeable grammar/spelling mistakes. I felt Hermione wasn’t as smart as she should be and Tom was a bit too soft, but then I just accepted them as both changing each other. The ending was very nice but sad at the same time because she was leaving her friends from the future for good. I believe your concept of time travel is a bit unclearthe fact that Tom left the music box for her suggests that the future we saw should have already been experiencing the effects of Hermione’s time travel (ie. there should be no Lord Voldemort at all). This is the sort of time travel seen in Prisoner of Azkaban and also in the film Somewhere in Time. The other notable concept of time travel is when one goes into the past and from that point in the past onwards, everything can be alteredeg. Star Trek (2009). But still a good read.

This was a very intriguing story. A few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing too bad. Nice job.

I must confess that I'm a bit confused at the drastic jump their relationship took in this chapter, especially the moment she says she's muggleborn and he basically snogs her then leaves.

I am aware that you wrote this story in 2014, but I want to tell you how much I appreciate the unique plot, especially for a time travel story. Most of those I have read have a dramatic scene in which [insert time traveler] must return, causing great angst and many tears. Hermione wasn't able to return, although she discovered the means to do so. It was a little confusing whether the spell Tom put on her was permanent or not. I also believe you did a remarkable job writing an unhealthy, but realistic, relationship between the two of them. I only wish I'd gotten to see a little more of the inner development towards a more healthy relationship. For example, an interesting scene would have been Tom thinking about whether or not to remove the said spell, as he considered trusting her to stay. Overall, great job!

Pretty! I liked the character development a lot!