can we fit soarin in a pillowcase dude I laughed so hard

to be honest rainboom is not really a trick it's more of
somepony flys very high then goes down with high speed to break the sound barrier no flips no loopty loops
if it is a trick someone tell me pls

Damn, that's tough. I hope you feel better though!

Ok, I still like this story but I feel like the canon characters are getting a wee bit uncharacteristic and it's getting harder to follow with their motives

I gotta say, this is the first story that has ever got me to enjoy reading about a ship that I don't necessarily ship (braeburn and spitfire). However as much as I love this story, I feel like the potty humour is a tad bit excessive. but other than that I love it!

Who is the red mare anyways?

SORRYYYYYY! i searched up on syphilis

...What...Happened.

You are a rally good writer, but I just gotta say, this is high quality comedy trash.

It was a little much with too much weirdness thrown in. And the ...romantic aspects of this were terrible. It was so pathetic it was hilarious. Great job on making as realistic as possible. Seriously, I've seen stuff like this in my hometown. Buy honestly, a little more fluff would be nice. I really liked the cloud scene with the rain and cake. Fantastic job with that. I could almost hear the rain even though it's sunny here. Overall, pretty good, but pretty pleeeeeeese make it less realistic. Keep it up and awesome!

I just finished reading up to this point in the story. I will admit, I am a very impatient person, but I know that this story will be worth the wait, which is saying quite a lot for me.

Yes! It's finally gonna happen!

...well that happened

...Wow. That was great!

FOURTH WALL EMERGENCY! NEW CRACK ACQUIRED DUE TO SOURCE IT HAS NO IMMUNITY TO!
But anyways, great chapter.

I am sitting here in my room BAWLING like a little kid and - looks over at her insane cat- my cat is staring at me probably thinking " how could I end up with a insane owner "

alright I understood that you're not in the condition to continue the story. All I could say is.. stay safe, take your time and even if we'll have to wait a whole semester for the next chapter, I won't blame you. Nor I will have any qualms with you. so all things said, thank you for writing such beautiful fiction, and please stay alive and get well soon. May the Magic of Friendship be with you.