Reviews for Ferrokinetic Shinobi
Tsang05 chapter 1 . 6/25
Truly magnificent
Kingkong101 chapter 10 . 11/20/2018
Lame
Luciendar chapter 15 . 3/24/2018
Well that was a let down. Good story though. It seems we share some ideas. I had a similar thought about a way to restore Kushina. I do think that you left a lot of potential for a Naruto/Hinata pairing even though you tagged it for Haku.
my 2 guys chapter 15 . 4/29/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
xNaruHina chapter 12 . 3/1/2017
That was epic!~ I was thoroughly impressed on how they stuck together and attacked one Jonin at a time with a well thought out strategy and mostly level heads. Their traps and play in on each others strengths was spot on. I only have one question and it is why Naruto didn't use his Ferrokinetic abilities to manipulate the iron inside of the Jonins bloodstream? Kakashi only said he couldn't use it on the objects in their pouches/pockets/on their person not IN their person right?
xNaruHina chapter 11 . 3/1/2017
I really hope it isn't Canon Team 7. Anyone else with Sasuke and Naruto would be an improvement.
xNaruHina chapter 7 . 3/1/2017
Also, with the Byakugan, wouldn't Hinata be better at medical jutsu than Sakura as well? Why didn't Naruto just make a metal clone? Or Kurama could have taught him the Shadow clone.
xNaruHina chapter 7 . 3/1/2017
How is Sakura Kunoichi of the year? Hinata is taking things seriously so shouldn't it be her? Also, couldn't Naruto just do a metal enhanced punch that would make Sakuras look like a soft tap? Wouldn't his do more damage?
xNaruHina chapter 5 . 2/28/2017
So, since House was watching the event, Muzuki will be taken care of ahead of time?
xNaruHina chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
Also, giving up leaving the village? Being trained by a Sannin from an early age? That had so much potential and now it's thrown down the drain
xNaruHina chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
Is this going to turn into a soft Naruto story where he forgives every wrong that everyone does and refuses to kill anyone? If so then we should expect even more Orochimaru like people yeah? That is the very reason their even was that entire clustercuck because Hiruzen believed he could be redeemed and was too soft to kill him... Kill in part of the Shinobi life..
xNaruHina chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Ooo, will Naruto be raised by Mikoto and Fugaku? That would be interesting and very unique.
marquis.shax chapter 10 . 2/8/2017
not sure about Han or Roshi but Utakata probably wasn't in the second war as he's about the same age as Yugito maybe a bit younger as he's 26 at the time of his capture. Figuring that Minato an Kushina were in only the 3rd war an died around the age of between 24 - 26 plus the fact that the Sanin were only teenagers when they fought in the second war there's probably a good chance that Utakata was either extremely young or not even born yet so there's no way he'd have been able to participate in the attack on Uzu even if he wanted to. As for Kumo if you want a jinchuriki to have been in on the attack I'd go with Blue B
marquis.shax chapter 8 . 2/8/2017
errm the Shadow Clone is only a B Rank HOWEVER the Multi Shadow Clone variant is an A rank (not really sure why they classify it as two different things when it's the same thing just pumping more chakra into it)
marquis.shax chapter 6 . 2/8/2017
hmm so you're not going the canon route of Shisui killing himself and giving his one remaining eye to Itachi or are you just having Itachi hide that from Sasuke and making up the story about sparring? Also I'll never understand the whole bullshit logic in canon where Itachi supposedly loves the village but doesn't bother to tell anyone about Danzo taking Shisui's eye it's like he just doesn't give a fuck what Danzo could do with the power of that eye such as end up starting the 4th war
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