Damn Perce he really went all out

Congrates! Loved the story! Peace.

YAY!

It's hard not to dislike Artemis and her huntress, there really are nothing more than a bunch of petty bitches. I will never understand why so many authors insist on having Percy treating this merry band of psychos with respect when all they do in response in spit to his face.

jake. who else? _ D ~_~

Honestly the last bit was unnecessary, but great start so far.

It’s so good

And so like thousand other Percy becomes the bitch of the pathetic and one of the weakest Gods, the Greek Gods.

Words dont describe this, It was amazing perfect.

What the fuck was that with Artemis at the end? "I'm gonna punch him because I'm a bitch LOL" That's all I got from it. I'm not reading a story where women punch people just because they are women and "it's okay for a girl to hit a guy".

Love it!

The ending was just... OMG THIS WAS THE BEST THING I EVER READ! Some spelling and grammar mistakes made it hard to understand at some times, but that’s probably it! This fanfic has, probably, the best plot I have ever seen, and... well, I have no words. The ending was so satisfying. Your four years of hard work won’t go unnoticed by those that read this fanfic.

It is a very nice plot; however, there are some grammar mistakes and other stuff that I forgot about while reading this awesome fanfic. I suggest that in future stuff, if you ever consider doing future stuff, that you don’t introduce so many characters at once, it makes it confusing. Other then that, this is a very original story, unlike mine... ANYWAY! Thanks for this fic, I needed to read this after reading so many Chaos fanfics.

Frickin awesome

Loving this book.