Reviews for What If?
Mukuro234 chapter 8 . 7/31/2019
This was such an awesome tear jerker fanfic!
sjsreader chapter 7 . 3/31/2016
I was really afraid this would have a sad ending. And it kind of did, with Sandy being really dead. But the ending still managed to make me smile. Yay for Jack to choose his family!
Zyenna chapter 7 . 2/2/2016
I'm sad that Sandman is gone but it's reeeeeaaally good... pleeeaaase update soon!
Agent blue rose chapter 5 . 11/16/2015
I cried soooo much in this chapter.
Agent blue rose chapter 4 . 11/16/2015
NO! nononononononnonono!
I REFUSE TO FFEEL SORRY FOR PITCH!
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE! PITCH IS THE BADGUY!
YOU HAVE RRUINED MY LIFE! (Let's out a dry sob and collapses to the floor)
I'm sorry. That was a bit too dramatic.
see you on the other side-TA
Guest chapter 7 . 3/22/2015
the twins along with Sandy smiled huge as they gave a thumbs up

I THOUGHT SANDY WAS DEAD
0kiJ9jio80i9j9 chapter 7 . 2/21/2015
Ah, Bunny will always be the toasted marshmallow. Crisp on the outside but all soft and gooey on the inside (after all he is a fluffy rabbit anyways). A new beginning for the reunited four Guardians.. I like this ending. It was sweet :) This was a good story.
0kiJ9jio80i9j9 chapter 6 . 2/21/2015
(Why did I take a whole decade to get back to this and review I don't even know oh my blob I'm sorry) This was so bittersweet. The descriptions of the way the Guardians felt and the guilt of Pitch was sad. I'm still upset that Sandy's gone but... obviously I know it DID say in the title that he's permanently gone here, but still. I'm so glad Jack returns safely and they can all go home :') But there's still one chapter I gotta read, so it's not over yet for me, woo! Anywho. :)
Mysterie1985 chapter 7 . 2/2/2015
that was good, I liked it
Mysterie1985 chapter 4 . 2/2/2015
omg the feeelllssss T-T Jack! noooooooooooooooooooooooooes!
LapisAlba chapter 7 . 1/11/2015
OMG crying here. The feels! Great story!
WEast chapter 7 . 1/10/2015
Very good ending! Very sweet and nice. I'm happy for them all (although, I did start singing Let It Go in that last paragraph with the Guardians). Hehe.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/10/2015
That is the absolute perfect last line. I loved your story. It was creative and different. I'm glad Sandy is still watching though.
YasminSnowflakeFaith chapter 7 . 1/10/2015
How come in part of that, Sandy is there? 'Til next time
WEast chapter 6 . 12/25/2014
Ooh, that was a horrible cliffie. Thanks for not ending it there!
Yay, happiness. Jack's back! So, you said the next chapter would be a prologue type thing. Are we still going to see Jack explain what happened? Maybe some bonding?
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