WOW! This is absolutely wonderful! It's completely original, utterly bizarre, fiendishly depraved, and laugh-out-loud funny, all at the same time. What a delightfully twisted imagination you have! I've read hundreds of HP fanfics, and I've never read anything close to how outrageously weird and creative this is.

I don't know what I like the best: the description of Homicidal Maniac Harry's costume, his sadistic sense of humor, his amazing brilliance at foiling everybody else's plans, or the way he tells everybody what's going on-AFTER it's too late for them to do anything to stop him.

If Harry went to Hell, this is what it would be like: an eternity of doing everything he could to help and save everybody, only to have victory snatched from him at the last second-and by himself!

Hmmm. Maybe these AREN'T all different universes. Maybe it's just one universe: Hell. And Harry's caught in an eternal time loop like Sisyphus, doing the same thing over and over but never succeeding. But just to make things even more torturous, each iteration is changed slightly so he THINKS he's still alive and jumping from universe to universe. Then he'll continue to hope, which means he'll continue to struggle, and even though he can never succeed, he doesn't know that, so he keeps hoping and struggling, for eternity!

If that were the case, Evil Harry could be Satan disguised as Harry, just to play with Harry's head by making him think he's fighting different versions of himself.

Is Harry really gullible enough to believe something his enemy told him? I hope he snaps out of it and realizes that something is up. Great story. Made me want to strangle Fate!

Oh my... I am reading POS and I am hoping for a happy ending. Now I fear it is no sure thing at all.
Nevertheless: great story. Chapeau.

Wow, just wow. Twist after twist. I loved the ending!

Sorry idc for it that much

That's the Multiverse for you. Good and bad,lol. Good little tale from The Darkside,lol. Thanks.

This might be my favourite Lone Traveler story so far. I always thought the Lone Traveler needed a good antagonist. It's really refreshing.

Certainly an interesting concept. It would be neat to see a couple more of these.

Cel

Whoa... that was wild. I was in the mood for some Dark!Harry, and this story gave me exactly what I wanted. It’s such a clever concept and proved to be a very enjoyable read.

Goodstuff

Holy mother of–...

Holy crap. Holy crap. This was awesome and so dark. Lone Traveler Harry crying was heartbreaking, it made me tear up. Then finding out about that stuff about Fate made me a bit angry at Fate but also relieved LT Harry won't end up like that

Also... Unfortunately for you, dark traveler, Harry went on to be a god and truly immortal so ha. You won't be able to kill him anymore

(Yeah, this is Dunuelos' canon, just can't help saying that haha)

awesome story. love the twist especially how things look to be getting better then suddenly they get worse. I loved the idea of how the dark traveller hid the horcruxes. Why couldn't voldemort think like that

That gives me the creeps

... You picked your name well... Damn man, that was intense as Fuck!

Twisted. Would love a sequel! So good!