I Tryed reading it but this too much like the anime I might as well be watching it eventually I jumped chapters and skimmed through it. Seren character is is pretty solid background and personality but if we take that out she doesn't feel original but almost like a female kira following the same roll. I was hoping the story would have developed and become unique compared to others but besides the oc, the mobile suit, and few scenes its all the same as the anime. This might be great for really hard core fans and new members . but for other regular fanfic readers looking for great read this one won't do it. I do think its great you continued your story and that many people follow it. My advice dont copy and paste and add a good OC people will loose interest in it fast. Add new battles, more side characters and character deaths, maybe some unique scenes, more conflicts and dont make it obvious to the reader throw in plot twists.

So my review good story my only complain till now is that you should go back to chapter 1 and 2 and fix them I got lost a few times while reading and felt a bit rushed. But when I read chapter 3 it was better written and easier to follow.

next season story gundam seed destiny

Feliz Navidad, creo que deberías continuar con la historia en Gundam Seed Destiny, me he visto la serie de anime y realmente quiero ver cómo se giraría la historia con Seren en la ecuación

Your story is really good! I actually began writing a fanfic for Gundam SEED with my own OC insert several years ago but never finished or posted it. While our OC's are quite different in personality and appearance, mines name is Serena so that was kind of a cool coincidence XD I can't wait to read the last chapter and I definitely think you should post the sequel! This has actually inspired me to try to finish my own story and possibly post it. Keep up the great writing!

Great chapter on Star-crossed-What we must protect-want to protect, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now and also please start working on the sequel to the story now please

Interesting thanks for updating and making the chapters long, I can't for more and the sequel.

Yes, I would like a Gundam Seed Destiny sequel. On the final chapter, can you keep Flay alive?

Great Chapter. I hope that I can enjoy the rest of the story. I did notice that you misspell Chairman in Chapter 45.

great chapter. I hope that you change it so that Flay gets to the Archangel.

Just...Awesome, just awesome to read something like this, keep it up until you reached the end! Or maybe until Destiny, idk, which ever prefers to you

just discovered this story! I really like this, since there aren't a lot of OC stories on this site. I wish there was a bit more of change from canon since you have a new character, but it's pretty great so far! Keep it up please!

AHAHAHA! I love it when things like this is out of hand! I just love a element of tragedy and the rage! Just keep on updating! I look forward to more of the SEED series.

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Your story is really... Captivating? I can't really find the correct word for it... I guess the main reason that i love your story so much is the way you write it... Its almost like i can hear their voices (Serens included) in my head as i read. Also Independence (the GUNDAM) and Seren's character and personality...