Good story so far, however a little confused, the AI said the ship would take a week to reach the new Tollan homeworld, yet it says that the ship had been travelling for 2 months. If it was brand new tech, would make sense, but the ship is a UNSC ship with years of experience and knowledge of the technology

please carry on this story

It makes no sense that Keyes speak to Cortana. Because in the game Cortana IS the package.

Goa'uld ships of the standard Apophis-Class Ha'tak were able to shrug Naquada-enhanced 1,000 Megatonne or 1 Gigatonne warheads, so they are not glass cannons and the Pillar of Autumn would only have a chance to defeat them with the Carpet Bomb-MAC Round-Shiva detonation tactic. Weird that you would say they are weaker than the Covenant since two shots from a Goa'uld Apophis Class destroyed entire cities... I love Halo x Stargate as much as the next person, but basic UNSC ships cannot stand against Goa'uld Ha'tak...

The Propellant for the bullets of UNSC are also better. Much better than modern standard. And can be used n Vaccuum, which is saying something...

the last chapter said a weeks travel while at the beginning of this its said 2 months? was it a typo?

Great so far, I hope you will continue to write more chapters for this story soon.

Please use Grammarly my guy. My head hurt reading this. Awesome story though. But again, please use grammarly it's free to use.

Excellent work, one of the best Stargate crossovers I ever come across (I also recommend Stargate Atlantis:The Robotech wars and Contact at the Citadel and all other "Contact" series)

Please update

Yo dude awesome story man. Just really starting to kick off...

I remember reading this mad work ages ago and I’m glad to see a few more updates. Though I hope to see many more and to see where this story goes.

Although I’m a bit bummed that I haven’t see the master chief yet. I’d like to see how the goa’uld respond to something so deadly That it should be impossible for a human of the Tau’ri.

Anyway dude I wish you luck and I sure hope to see more of you amazing work

This is a nice story, but i kinda want to see Master Chief mixing things up with the goa'uld! Anyways keep up the good work.

Great story,
I have enjoyed reading it so far.
Please do keep writing more chapters soon.

Please update

Great story, please continue.