| Reviews for Trials Of A Young Hero (the way of the Spider) |
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   Kagetoraninja chapter 35 . 2/20 6 months short of a three-year hiatus yet I pray and hope this story returns. |
| Dbetts00 chapter 1 . 7/31/2019 Please update |
| The Story's Shadow chapter 35 . 8/17/2017 So this is the opening skirmish? It's already bad enough. White Tiger needs to get out of the battle and get herself healed up. Wedding? Wow, kind of a bad time to tell him, but I guess he had to tell him some time. Nicely done. |
| Death Fury chapter 35 . 8/16/2017 Good job |
| Rwbyfan259 chapter 34 . 7/12/2017 I hope Peter and Ava get back to being a couple like in secrets |
| Mistico15 chapter 34 . 7/12/2017 Glad to see the return of this story and good chapter I liked it. i feel like there could be possible drama with Peter, Ava and Alternate Ava cause Ava-2 lost her Peter. So I could see her struggling with her emotions when seeing this worlds Peter. Which could cause a bit of drama, witv a scene like Ava-2 standing outside and Peter goes to comfort her or sees whats wrong and it escalates to Ava-2 kissing Peter with Ava-1 seeing this and goes into an argument with Ava-2 thinking that she was trying to "steal" Peter. Which could cause high tension between the two that could effect with their teamwork in the battlefield. Its you're choice if you'd like to use this idea but can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Death Fury chapter 34 . 7/10/2017 great job |
| The Story's Shadow chapter 34 . 7/10/2017 Why do I get the feeling all hell is about to break loose? I don't see anything wrong with the two Avas sharing Peter, unless the other Ava gets her Peter back. |
| N7 BOB chapter 33 . 4/17/2017 Wow I am really enjoying the story keep up the good work ...BOB:) |
| awsm28617 chapter 33 . 3/10/2017 i hope you finish the story because i absolutely love it but every time i get hooked the story ends up abandoned i think you updated it recently i hope you see it through |
| TigerX chapter 33 . 1/22/2017 Sorry, for the extra comments, my wifi was laggy and I had to repost the comments |
| TigerX chapter 33 . 1/20/2017 When is "Bonds of betrayl Spiderman's end" coming back? Is it dicontinued because I really like that story with Crimson Cougar coming to NYC |
| TigerX chapter 33 . 1/20/2017 I'm enjoying this story but what happened to the "Bonds of betrayl Spiderman's end?" Is that coming back, or is it finished? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2017 I'm enjoying this story, but what happened to the "Bonds of Betrayl Spiderman's end?" Is that coming back? |
| TigerX chapter 1 . 1/20/2017 Is bonds of betrayl Spiderman's end coming back? Because this is a good story, but I also found that interesting with Spidey's death. |
