Reviews for Mountains
Guest chapter 5 . 12/31/2015
omg love it :3
ddp456 chapter 5 . 1/25/2015
Sorry for the delay, but I just finished your story.

I loved the descriptions of the two snuggling against each other as well as the nerve wrecking final peril.

Great job with the story and keep me in the loop for the newest one! See you then!
Leafstrikeh chapter 5 . 1/24/2015
This fic was beautiful!
StkAmbln chapter 5 . 1/23/2015
That was hell of a trip, I wonder if anybody got worried about them, or suspicious...

What a great way of transporting us to the wild mountains and giving a lesson of how to survive them. Really, it felt real. Congrats to both Dipper and Wendy for being such amazing campers, and for surviving. I think they will cherish the expirience forever, or at least until they have another dangerous adventure. Nah, they'll never forget it, but they will still get into more trouble.

Thanks for this, pal! Kind of sad because it ended, but really pleased anyway.
TheEquestrianidiot 2.0 chapter 5 . 1/17/2015
And then a bunch of Vampires from "30 Days of Night" came outta nowhere and ate their throats. XD

Man, this was a hell of a ride! I loved the way you managed to get all the descriptions of the woodlands all . . . . description-y! Heh, seriously though, this was awesome. I was always hanging in to the edge of my seat whenever I would read this, and I'm ecstatic that everything turned out ok. And I cannot WAIT for that WenDip story! So until then, you stay awesome and I will see YOU . . . in the next chapter. Bye-bye!
granddad chapter 5 . 1/17/2015
Engrossing chapter. I could feel the near dispair and then the elation when they reached the campsite. I particularly enjoyed Dipper's rescue of Wendy after she had fallen on the rock climb. It was realistic and had me rooting for them.

Is "face planted" a typo?
E350 chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
Woo! They lived! You had me kind of worried at a few points there, but they lived!

Very nice work, I enjoyed it heartily. I shall wait eagerly for your next story. Keep up the good work!
Psycho Delic263 chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
Excellent work, Monty. You've created the first Gravity Falls wilderness survival fan fiction. Well done.
broken halleluiah chapter 5 . 1/16/2015
What a great conclusion! It was so satisfying to see them driving away from the mountains as the sun set. That image was wonderful. I enjoyed the final moments of suspense with Wendy hanging off the cliff- she and Dip became such a great team! I seriously can't wait for your next fanfic. You have their character dynamics nailed down and that will be so important for a shippy story. I know it'll be great. Anyways, wonderful work, I'm sorry to see it end. :)
GoodForBad chapter 4 . 12/30/2014
Great chapter! The only thing Wendy would have had to do before cooking the rabbit was skinning it though - I don't imagine they'd want to eat fur or anything. Regardless, nice update. Dipper is so insecure with his failure as usual, and I like the fact that Wendy doesn't just want to sit and wait. I think I'd be the same way! Nicely done!
StkAmbln chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
Aw, Wendy staying to set up the fire while brave Dipper goes into the wilderness to hunt. They look just like a couple. At least that is until Dip fails and Wendy shows why she is allowed to carry an axe with her. This is Gravity Falls after all.
So, the next chapter will be the last one? Well, it was nice anyway. They survived and made cool things. There was even time for some of Dipper's feelings.
ddp456 chapter 4 . 12/27/2014
Liked the twist here! Here's hoping for a cute ending!

Also, good luck with your newest story ideas!
ddp456 chapter 3 . 12/27/2014
Great chapter. Sorry I didn't write earlier; I missed the update. Moving on to chapter 4!
Psycho Delic263 chapter 4 . 12/25/2014
Very nice, but I'm not sure you could feel that much better one night in bed. Merry Christmas, Monty.
TheEquestrianidiot 2.0 chapter 4 . 12/24/2014
Aw. At least yay tried Dippingsauce!

Wait . . . . Fuck. Now I wanna write Wendy as an Assassin from "Assassin's Creed". The picture of her in those white robes with the brakes hood . . . It's just too epic. Only because she I can her as incredibly stealthy. And having mad reflexes. Heh. Is that weird? No? Eh, maybe. Anyway, you stay awesome, and I will see YOU . . . in the next chapter. Bye-bye!
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